that was one hell of an AWESOME fic!
when they were under water i started choking - and shego with the self destruct - i was having an heart attack! AWESOMELY WRITTEN! AMAZING FIC!
it was such a joy to read and one of the best fics i've ever read!

amazing love it.. even though its kinda old its still really good

XD Love it! Spamming D.E.B.S. over the Caribbean... Lol, Cin is quite ingenious. Damn, that crime business is sounding fun. xD If only it were that way in real life, Lol.

Story was adorable, and truly introduced me to the Kigo pairing, which I am now totally shipping major-league for. <3 Thanks a ton for that.

Gah. This is making me want to squeal. o/o Love it. I'm beginning to think I srsly need to actually watch-watch Kim Possible, as of late, with all the cute-tastic femslash fics of it. <3

... The "even for a possible!" pun(s!) reminded me of why I have not yet gotten around to that show-watching bit, of course. xD

Cute fic, so far. :D

Well, I came across this due to a discussion on this sort of plotline over on KP/Haven.

Very nicely done. I'm putting it on my "To read between stories" list. I'll get to the rest soon enough.

This was a very well put together story. I really liked your character Cin.

Senor Senior Senior plans were very well thought out. Though I gotta admit I'm a fan of S like Cin too. ^.^;

I don't know what to say, it was just a very awesome story. A must Fav for me. :D

Irony’s THE bitch, isn’t it? Yet I’m still laughing at the ending. XD Everything seemed SO doomed for a moment and then they all turned out SO greatly. Señor Senior really gained my respect around this story, and I love the outcome of Cin, six years later as Miss Cin, the criminal (Bonnie as her sidekick, I assume). Talk about making a good work with an OC, you… ^_^

And hey, I’m surprised of the twist you’ve found for Shego’s condition. She now has a sort-of solution for the orders she knows she ought not follow, while she can still get the kinky pleasure from it. I suppose this is a much better outcome than just Kim forbidding herself of using it, since it’s clear she would not be able to absolutely keep up that “promise” she made to herself.

Anyway, I really enjoyed the whole fic. And to give you some filling, these six chapters and reviews were read and written in the last three or four days (before this, I was TOO hooked in one particular videogame ^^U), and damn it was good reading. Again, thanks for writing this amazing story. ^_^

And it’s a bit late, but… happy new year! XD

Yup, an exciting half-hour. This party’s going GREAT! XD

Really, I love the way things are going on. No scene has neither too much nor too little description, but just what’s needed. Sometimes there seems to be a bit of lacking regarding the surrounding, but probably because that’s not something to care about so much.

Also, good work on giving each character an equal share of the spotlight during these parts. The whole thing works a lot better when it’s pretty clear that all of them needed to do each one’s part or none of them would have survived. ^_^

All right, onwards to the last chapter! X3

Geez… damn, right: Scientists! I feel Monique’s pain, but man, what a couple you had there! XD Still so, I don’t even wanna know how you managed such research, or was this based on something? It somehow feels oddly familiar, but I can’t even begin to pinpoint from when or where.

And is it just me, or it’s been two chapters since we haven’t heard anything about Shego and Ron? Boy, this last ones are getting short. And there’s only two chapter lefts? Wow, sounds like it’s gonna be fast. ^^

Let’s get the party started! XD

Sounds like Shego was right about that the villain was planning. Not the intention behind it, though, but man… I dunno how, but you must have done something like thinking like a villain to make up such a convenient plan for Señor Senior.

And Kim is now trapped? Well, I kinda expected that to happen to either her or Ron and Shego. These parts seem to be moving on slow, if you ask me.

The scene at the dinning table was quite good, though. The interaction of these character is something I haven’t seen before, and apart from that, I gotta say I love seeing the bits of Bon/Cin coming up again. ^_^

Going for the next chapter! (Man, I’m close to the end now! XD)

Geez… now I know what you said ‘bout things getting cool when Señor Senior arrived. His interaction with Cin is hilarious! Specially with Bonnie and Will getting so weird out because of it! XD Good job on that one, talk about giving a villain a new type of interaction. ^_^

And well, seems like now Kim is going to the same lair that Shego, Ron and everyone inside the digging machine. I wonder how they’ll meet up. Well, gotta keep reading to find out. Still, even though I was right about Señor Senior having tricked Will Du into doing his errand, I think I still don’t know so much ‘bout his whole plan, beyond what Shego was guessing.

All right then, see ya later!

Well, things are getting both nice and/but confusing around here. ^^U

Regarding the confusion, well… let me see if I get this clear: Will Du was the one “stealing” the Digging Machine? I mean, so it seemed, but kinda is if it were misgiving orders. Like he thought he was “running an errand” for Dr. Director, but ended up doing a job for Señor Senior. Well, I’ll wait to see if I understand anything more later ^^U

On the other hand, well, I really AM glad that Kim and Shego are, like Ron put it, back on again. But I really think there’s more to come to terms with. I mean, she forgave her once, but she has to make sure Kim won’t use her powers like that again, right? Well, I doubt the Mind-Control thing won’t appear anymore (it’s the meaning of the story’s TITTLE), so there’ll sure be something about it later.

And like always, the character’s portrayal keep excelling. This time with Ron and Cindy, while the others keep up the good work as well. Honestly, I never have enough of such amazing work. Every single part of the story keep you into it somehow, there’s a surprise at every paragraph. I’m even trying to learn from this, but I don’t know whenever I’m doing things right or not. But still, thanks for this story, because it’s certainly teaching me a lot. ^_^

See ya in next review!

Another character whose portrayal seem to get deeper is Dr. Director. Her personality seems to be the one of someone who's personal moral is beyond good and evil. As much of a good guy that she is, she has no problems being as cruel and unfair as she can. Can't say for sure whenever I like that or not. Most of the time it irks me, but still, it IS a good work.

And again, I loved the interaction between Cindy and Bonnie. Could the supervillain idea be more than just a fantasy? I'd like to see that! ^_^

Now, as good headed as this seems to be going, I doubt the KiGo issue is already solved, but everything at its due time. In my opinion, Kim still needs to learn about how seriously bad was what she did to Shego back there, and only after realizing how bad it was, apology correctly.

Just so you know: Following reviews might come in group, since I'm downloading the chapters 'cause I'm gonna be Internet-less for the following days, unless I go somewhere else where I can get a connection, from there I might send my reviews.

Well, see you in next review, and have a merry christmass ^_^

My, my... "So the drama" dosen't even BEGIN to describe it!

While one couple seems to be getting better, Kim and Shego are just... well, "beyond break-up", I'd say. This is gonna take a lot to solve, and the worst part is... I can't blame neither of them for how they are feeling! DAMN!

Oh, and I almost forgot: You know, based on the other two fics I've read from you, I never thought you'd have it for this, but... you actually are good at making OCs, you know? I think Cindy is really well rounded and balanced. Congratulations on make her.

But I still can't forget the KiGo issue! Gr... see ya in next review! ò_ó

*whistle*

Well, what a chapter. And now I can't wait for the drama that's surely coming next, but first: This review.

You know, something that really keeps amazing me is how you seem to have knowledge about EVERYTHING. Parachuting, airplanes, emergency lands. I doubt, specially on the third case, that this is from actual experience, but the amount of technicism making it all seem so real is seriously outstanding.

Heh, Monique is still kicking asses, and on the other hand, well, Cindy is not having it too well, but I'm actually glad for this, since it means there's gonna be more of these two as well.

Last but not least, I gotta say that I LOVED the dream sequence. It worked quite right as you can expect a dream to work, 'cause even after you wake up, you can never fully remember how things went exactly, and many just didn't make any sense. I usually don't remember my dreams, but when I do... man, they are SOME funny story to tell. XD

Anyway, I'm getting off-topic here. I know I'm reading slow, but the story's going great. Man, I'd wish you still wrote fanfics like these. ^^U
See ya in next review!