AMG haha LOVED IT!

Good story!

WOW! That was really good! At first I was confused that Farf died because I to have read the drama CDs, but quickly realized many people haven't. Then in the next chapter you answered that question and everything made sense agan. Hehe! I am oddly a fan of the Drama CDs but I do agree that they needed to add moer about Schwartz in the CDs or the anime. They never told much about that team. (Well not much about the the two best members Brad and Schul at least. lol)

But VERY good story and you are a very good author. That was well writen and the idea was wonderful! I loved how it ended as well, it was very closing. (Don't find that in many fics anymore)

Anyways congrads on completeing it, and once again wonderful job.

Last? Last?? Oh my. *bites her fingernails* This was such an awesome chapter. Schuldig finally woke up. ^__^ I didn't like the nurse (get your fingers off Schu, you little--) that much, but she was okay. ^^' Spotted a few typos, I think, but nothing bad. And Bradsie's weird, cuddling him while he's in a coma. *giggles and rolls eyes* Don't mind me, I've just woken up... ^_~ Waiting for the next chappie, hun!

Ah, so unfair, it is a cliffhanger ! But so, no more amnesiac Schu? I like his amnesia... it freaks out Crawford and makes for cute plot bunnies ^_^ Anyway, interesting twists and details and playing with the languages and such! Write soon!

Aww, this was sweet. Like, I don't know, love-hate sweet. The calm, all-noticing Nagi is one of my favourite interpretations of his personality (don't know if I'm typoing like crazy, don't have the dictionary around xD). The ending was really nice after the quite scary vision and Brad's abnormal behaviour. Waiting to see more! ^_^

beautifully and subtly romantic. I loved it. I could not help but aww at the end. Please write more!

Schuldich is a funny drunk. Those are the best kinds

WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL FARFIE?! HE WAS THE BEST! COULDN'T HAVE THAT BLASTED SIBERIAN DIED IN HIS PLACE!
*CRIES*

I must say I have to agree when it came to the Schwarz dramatics cd's, good move. I know my stories will surpass as if they aren't there either.

Nice chapter; yes its short but its a full of information, don't sell yourself short. You are a great writer! I'm looking forward to the next one ; )

--Mai Fujimiya aka Nikola von Schadenfreude

I luve to see Crawford suffer because of the fact that he might lose Schuldig ! ( I am a little sadist XD ). But I hope he'll wake up !
Short chapter but I liked it.

Marron

Beautiful work!! I'm still fairly new to Weiss Kreuz so I don't really know a whole lot...but from what I make out, you're work sounds a ton better than the bitter fluid that is the Dramatic CD's after the Kapitel series. No offense to those who can truly understand them, of course.

Bravissimo with your background story with Schuldig. It's something that I'm sure I couldn't match since there's no real official story about him (that I can find anyway...).

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Like I said before, beautiful work!

*scratches head* The only question I had about this chapter: Is this chapter two years ago, or just after the beach incident? I'm assuming two years ago, since mostly everything else is, so far. *_*

God, I actually feel sorry for Crawford in this chapter. I don't think a fanfic has ever made me feel sorry for the guy. A few have come close, but are still miles away from this.

I don't know if that makes Schu and Crawford out of character here, or if it means that you're one ** awesome writer. Choose which ever one you like (though I'd pick the latter if I were you...).

I can't wait for the next chapter - I love this story!!

I love this story. The two of them have such a relationship. Kind of a symbiosis relationship. Crawford keeps Schuldich out of trouble (for the most part) and Schuldich in return gives support to his leader. Both need the other pretty much to survive. I can't get enough of it! Please write more!

I just have to love Crawford's first words. *giggles* "You ** up". xD The mission comes always first, ne? (Or does it..?)
I think you wrote the we-just-fell-into-freezing-water-and-are-fighting-to-stay-alive-and-warm -part well; I certainly hope such a thing hasn't happened to you! :) Crawford's reaction to Schuldig is quite understandable, too. He can be a dreaded enemy... if is your enemy, that is. Poor men, I hope they'll get things straight soon.
(Oh. I didn't recognise the Chinese statue Schuldig held. Mind telling me what it was? ^^)

Farfie is NOT dead!

As you may know Weiß Kreuz was/is (?) a show on the radio. I have translated scripts somewhere on my computer.

Anyway he left Schwarz with a woman named Sally more or less turning "normal" again (radio). I think he even protected her from the rest of Schwarz.

So he is NOT dead... just not Farfarello anymore but Jei.

Like the story... love slash... love Crawford/Schuldig!