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Reviews For: Crystaline

giveGodtheglory
2006-02-28
ch 4,
abusePowerful character insight and developement. Not sappy at all. And you know it's got to be good if an Emma hater like me is reading and reviewing it.
giveGodtheglory
2006-02-07
ch 1,
abuseOne suggestion for an otherwise really great start. Could you put a row of dashes between the different viewpoints to make them a bit easier to follow?

God bless!
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