Great story except the fact that you stole the name Lakeview. You can't fool me because i read all the Virginia Andrews books.

ooh, that was good. EVIL SKYLAR PERSON!!... just one question.. why are they alll famous? oh well ,anyways, it's great so far, I must keep reading.

Wow. I sure hope Ebony gets released. You're on my authoralerts for this! Great story! Write more soon!

that's cool! i want to hear the rest of the story. keep on going

A very interesting story. Those four don't really saeem mad but I guess you can never tell with some people hey ;) Very nicely written, a little more description about the...uh...character of each character would be nice but I guess that'll come in subsequenht chapters. Keep it up :)