Poor Kakashi, evil Sue experiences and Sasuke's evil brother getting all the luck.

(A bit fume at self for not reviewing sooner)

LMAO

You know, this would've been a success if it weren't for the in-your-face attempts to hilarity and the corny encounters. It's just wholly lacking in detail that it actually leaves nothing to the imagination. You just keep on saying 'perfect' over and over that she's almost NOT a Mary Sue. I'm not gonna complain about your elementary language command and syntax but you should at least try to make a good story. There's just practically nothing here but OOCness and far-from-funny lines. Sorry.

clever, funny, and parodic. The ending with Itachi seemed random/tacked-on but it didn't really detract from the story. This story has a moral that we all could learn from. The quote in the beginning is cool too. A-

*cackles*

Love that Mary Sue rhyme :D

And the little section at the end XDXD

+s-fav!!

I loved it! Hilarious!

yay!
one less mary sue in the world!!

Thank you for parodying Mary-Sues. I myself have had many close run-ins with these beasts, and you described them perfectly. Oh yes, and I love the last section. Go Itachi! Keep up the good work and welcome to my favorite stories list.

hey rikku, could you help me come up with some really cliched, low quality mary-sues? i need a few for a story i'm helping someone with, but i've been unable to make any beyond the sharingan/byakugan wielder, who has a ten-tailed demon in them, or something like that. do you have any ideas?

That was a good one! Write more of these soon. I loved the ending part.

Have to admit that is a very fun read you have created there. Its long enough to cover what you wanted to, but short enough as to keep the readers attention and make you want more. Great job.

LOL i lovethis story!

that was kind of weird...

WHO THE HELL IS A MARY SUE?!?! THEY KEEP POPING UP LIKE THAT! MARY SUE THIS! MARY SUE THAT! WHO R U?!?!?!?!

hahaha I love the story...the ending was the best. Getting Itachi to give the whole if you wish to kill me, hate me, detest me, and survive in an unsightly way. Run, run and cling to life.

This version is better though because sasuke is not being hurt in anyway...

and If you care to know...no I am no mary sue.

But I am a crazy fan...-pushes other girls out of the way and runs off with Itachi

*smile*