This was interesting. Normally, I don't like stories like this, but this one was pretty good. I'll probably read that revised version later. Maybe. Not right now though.

Very funny one some parts. Fangirls are terrifying. I would be amazed if they aren't traumatized. And I liked that world theory in this. Particularly with Rurouni Kenshin. Including the sword was awesome.

hahahaha, getting mobbed by fangirls sounds horrible, poor kratos and crew

Hm, hope kratos has a portable bunker in his wing pack, along with a good supply food, and an escape dragon

They should have gotten autographs! A Stry i may remember for years to come

Whoo... Just read all of that... though I was distracted by the world waayy too much... This is really, really good. Oh, I must know what happens next!
...And for your reference, I was just looking through someone's reviews and saw you, took a look and decided to read. You got me laughing much in the beginning. Then the strict part of the story surfaced. Well done, for the most part. ^^

good story

I like it. Not clear on the parts from... whatever the Kenshin (sp?) stuff is, but you were descriptive enough to give me a general idea of what it was. That's the mark of a good author-better than me, for sure. Good story.

This story is so good! ^-^ I congratulate you!

It has been a joy reading this. Expect me to read the sequel, too. Till then, see ya later!

Well, it's better than what I've read from the last time. Like I've said before, it was one crazy chapter after another. But what really caught me off guard was the party that you've put up in the chapter. Man, most of the characters that you've put up were definitely OOC(Out of Character). But that's good seeing that they could chill out and relax after the battle that they've just had. But the couples are rather cute. Both Lloyd and Colette together is something that I would normally expect. So do both Genis and Presea, though despite the fact that Genis was the one that needed to be saved for once. As for both Zelos and Sheena, well let's just say that this is the first fic that I've ever read about the two of them dancing together on each other's own free will(With the added threat that Sheena threw at him if he tries anything perverted). But what really caught me off guard was the way that you've got both Sheena and Aaron talking to one another as if they were like a regular couple. Well, in any case, I hope that the remake of the story called Heart, Soul, and Sword. I could wait for it to come out. In the meantime, take some time to chill and party while you still can. I know that I'm going to be very busy once I enter college again for the Fall. Well, later!

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This is possibly the greatest chapter of anything I have ever read.

This is a great story, and it seems that great things can come out of small things. It is a shame that I didn't review more or add this story to my story alert list.

Thank you for the story

wow...now that its over, im sad. i just wasnt ready. here is my advice as an author, though it may not count as much:

1. Your writing style is fabulous, keep with it
2. Sad is your best genre. Use it as much as youi can
3. You are one of the best authors that i have ever read.
4. I can't wait for the next one
5. And if you give up, I will never forgive you.

Good luck, and may the Goddess watch over you.

Very enjoyable story. Thank you for writing this. Do you have plans for a sequal? Haha, it's alright if you don't but it so seems like something that could happen, especially the way you left us with the cryptic message from the dream person. Perhaps the Earth gang heads to Sypmhonia this time? Whatever you want, you know. Just suggesting something.
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Rockie

Eh, 's okay...