I know it has been almost 3 years, but I hope you are still interested in writing on this story. I have read all 3 stories that are in this series, they are really good. I know you are in H.S. now and probably really busy, but, if you have anymore written already... I loved the last part about the clocks, do you still have yours? Anyways, I have enjoyed reading your stories.

i almost started crying again ALMOST!

guess what i finally stopped crying! i bet ill start again tho

sweet story keep updating please. keep up the good work

Great story so far. I think it needs a little bit more of actual angst though. No one is really yelling, or doing anything for that matter.

Goofs:

1. I spelled and as ant

2. I spelled felt as felf

3. I spelled Raine as Raind

4. I spelled Hoyt as Howt

5. I spelled Jimmy as Jummy

6. I repetitively spelled Martha as Marthat

7. I typed two years instead of two days

8. I wrote she instead of he for Zack.

On the chapter entitled: Stupid you did that. Funny coincidence eh? =P

omg it was so awesome
it was completely amazing

sorry i cant think of any words good enough to describe it

That was such a great chapter!it made me cry!More soon!

post more please
its awesome

toto,
that was good! write more soon! write more soon! hurry!
w-squeaky-darthplaigus

i loved it but please please please write more

it was completely awesome
but poor martha aw
poor zack

NICE.UPDATE.OR ELSE.. >:]

Wow... post more!

HAHAHAAHA Jummy... lmfao

But completely the opposite for the story.

Waa... so SAD! But AWESOME! I loved it. Hey... you update more than I do...

More soon!

Uh... please update. You do realize it's been 3 weeks? sheesh.