Awe thats so cute! Piece of advice be sre that your using the right since sense. Kay!

Aw...so cute!

oh, cute ending! cute story! cute everything! luv it! *hands a cookie* jaa ne!

so cute.

so cute.

Oh, I'm piting you that you have to hid it from your parents and sis. I think that most of us do. My parents don't know that I like yaoi even if they now that I'm fully supporting homosexuals. However my brother knows. He doesn't have anything against my interests (I was the ona that made him in manga maniac. Jeez, he has more mangas downloaded then I have heard of!) but there was one time when I asked him if he will help me write yaoi fic coz his not that bad with plot but he was all like 'NO'. He likes action anyway. Anyway I'm blabling, ain't I?

I love Ed drunk and petting Roy and eating and kissing Roy and blushing and Roy proposing! But when Roy calls Ed chibi I can't help but think about Envy.

Poor Ed. Meas is soo mean. But when I imagine Roy being locked between sofa and Kneeling on him, and kissing him Ed it just looks so hot!

aw!(ccrowd of onlookers and yaoi fans)

NOW WHY CAN'T YOU AND MARK BE LIKE THAT ALEX!

[because I'm desidedly straight and he's a flamboyant flamer]

/O AM NOT!/

{LOOK A NAKED FIREMAN!]

/WHERE!/

[see told ya...flamboyantly gay and horney]

LOVED IT! That's such a good fic! Yay for Roy and Ed! You definatly rock my socks!

nice i do like this fic

and others that youve written i would probably like too

im writing a FMA fic, its gonna be crap compared ot your

l8as

J

roflmao

that is hilarious!

omg please write more fics like this one

l8as

J

Dude! That's some fucking strong beer!

Hey, just a few short tips when you're writing a DrunkFic:

1) One beer can't get you drunk. It only has, like, 5 o 6 degrees of alcohol. Not enough degrees, if you're past the age of...five. XD Use Vodka or Scotch, those have 18 degrees, more or less.

2) But if you ARE using beer to get some one drunk, make sure you tell people it is a freakishly strong beer with about...7 or 8 degrees of alcohol, and make the chara drink more than one can.

3) The faster you drink the faster you get drunk and, also, the drunker you get.

Anyway. It's just that.

But I loved this fic and laughed like crazy from beginig to end. Lovely!

Very very cute I hope you do another.

aww this was so cute! i think way better then if ed had been a girl that's just strange.

Cute story. It's funny that your family reads these, too. There's no way I can let my mom or any family member know I'm writing these. They're so nosy, though, but I'm trying._