This is really good! All the characters sound like they would in the anime, even so that I could hear their voices. Poor Menchi though...

Ah, no reviews? Well, that's sad, I found it amusing and well-written. Just one suggestion, and that's just that there should be a new paragraph when someone different thinks or speaks, to make it easier to read. Otherwise, yeah, I liked it! It seemed to fit in quite well with the style of the show, which can be really hard to do...