Can't believe you killed them all - especially Remy - but it's a good story nonetheless. Are you continuing with this one?

Want any plot bunnies?

Loadsa love, hugs and PLOT BUNNIES, Katatonia

OH MY ! You must write more. This is a great story, and all of the characters are done really, REALLY well. You captured a lot of the characteristics of Logan, Pete, Scott, and Kitty. Even the Prof was top notch, you must have done your homework. As for your new characters, I think Emily is great. Jeremy still needs some more development, he's still one dimensional. The audience isnt able to figure out what makes him tick. Still, this is a fantastic piece of work... I hope you write more!

MORE... again i say MORE

I was hoping you'd add more! Great part! I'm a huge Pryde and Wisdom lover! More! More! More!

Nice piece of work! Eeven if Pete's stamina might be a little exaggerated, maybe...)

I'd like to see more, so jump to it! Never keep the readers waiting too long ...