Argh! You got there first!

I was going to do something like this.

(sulk)

Oh well

It's an interesting idea. This plot has a large amount of merit (what the h*ll were the writers smoking when they wrote the last episode, and where can I get some?), and I'd like to see you write more, but I have one very important critique. You *need* a beta-reader. Some of the grammar was terrible, and made the story very hard to read.

*waves* Ciao! I'm so sorry for the delay! *shame shame*

Anyway, since I couldn't reply to your message on the Forum (don't ask me why...) is it okay with you if I reply here? I hope so!
No, I don't live in Milano, but I live in Bergamo, a town just outside Milano. )
And about the story, I say it's really original! ;) I couldn't have never imagined Digiworld giving such, ahem, 'opportunities' to the Digidestined. Kouko sounds so good! )
Maybe write something about them as teenagers? A story of their own?

*lotsa virtual hugs* Bye-bye! :)

I would ask how the digital world allowed them to have children...but you know what, I don't want to know. Very creative, you had me going for a second that they were going to kill Takeru! Well done -