oh that was so good

That was beautiful! ;_;

a lil confusing overall, tho not necessarily bad.

Gack! Lina and Zel would sooo never be a couple. Sorry for the bashing ;;;

AHHHH! This is sooooo good. Not overly sappy yetnot too withdrawn. Oh this is so nifty! I like your story but really you shouldn't give up on writing. Why would you want to? It doesn't have to be your only means of survival. You've done a good job continue you writing if you are willing to... -

Awwwwww! How cute!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! KAWAIII! L/Z RULES! _;; Keep it up kay? Can't wait for more of your ficcies!