good chapter

AW! MAN...sigh it was just getting good, why not finish it

lol, poor kagome, i just love this story so please update XD

...AMAZING! this is such an awesome story! and ur idea for kagome to be this gaean miko? genious! there are so many diff things going on in the story that it makes it complex in a wonderful kinda way. uve got kagomes advancing abilites, her relationship with sess, naraku, kagura, her training, the refiners fire, and so many others! keep up the good work! pls update soon, author-sama! till next time, ne?

hats ** ** you overpower kagome and you make sesshomaru into a **.

PLEASE! FOR THE LOVE OF CORN COME BACK AND ADD MORE TO THIS FIC! I have checked up on it for two years straignt and I would be forever greatful if you kept it going.

First off this is an awesome story and I don't what made you wait a whole YEAR (I would have used italicizes to make and emphasis my point but since this isn't an option I chose to capitalize. Not that I'm not mad at you) to update it. Second I want to say is I love both you and Bruce and you remind me of Kagome and Sesshomaru in this story. I also want to tell Bruce that I agree with you about him riding you motorcycle, because telling by his author notes it seems he the kind of guy to push on the pedal and then crash into a pole or something that sounds equally, if not worse, stupid. I bet I'll read it on Yahoo to.

Hey! I havn't finished reading you're story yet, but so far I really Like it.
^-^
I wish I could keep reading but It is now my bed time...

The first time i read tthis was goin' on four yrs ago...i always seem to come back and re-read it though...i really wish you had finished it, it's completely brilliant..iwouldnt have a negative thing to say about it...=]

Oh no! What a "devil" cliffhanger!
I've looked forward to read the sequel of your story all day and its' end is so frustrating! I feel just like Inuyasha when Naraku escapes once more! Or when he has no more ramen! Or just like Miroku when he wanted so badly to grope Sango at Mont... (I just don't remember the name of this holy mountain!) and he can't because he's forced to act "pure"!

I've enjoyed reading your story and I really hope you're going to work on it again! Please! Imagine that I've got some Puppy eyes... can you resist it? Yes? and what if I have Sesshy's phone number? (of course I don't but it's so much fun to write it!).

To end my rewiew, I must say that I have really enjoyed your story (it costs me some sleep hours!... and how can you explain your students that you're looking so tired just because you've reading Inuyashas fanfiction the whole night?) ^^', thank you for writing it!


Sorry for my poor english... I'm french but since I only read english-written fanfiction since december, I think I've made some improvements!

IrisAyame (not a Kouga-fan, Iris is my real name... hi hi!)

can u plz continue dis story

hi!

Wow, that was really an amazing story, one of the best I've read to date. I like how well defined each character is, and how you dont rely on either romance or drama to drive the plot, the plot drives itself, and the other two are just on the side, tho it seems like you've suddenly cranked up the romance valve. I'd personally say that Kagome reacts weirdly... like, unreasonably in some situations, mainly when she gets mad. But then again, I'm a guy, and i find my best friend (who happens to be female) unreasonable when she gets mad too...

Anyways, wonderful read. Great plot and character developement, language and grammar is good, and overall flow is nice too. :) I hope you decide to start writing again, since the date of the last update was really quite a while ago... this story is really amazing, and I hope you decide to continue to write it.

-Monk

dude, i need more. that wuz a good story. hurry and finish.


PLEASE!
//_~

this is a really good story but i think u should put a little more romance b/w the two
plz finish this story
it is really good

I am really enjoying your story and i can't wait for the next chapter to come out. i do notice sometimes moments in the story go to fast like your trying to basically get something down instead of really pay attention to it. usually its really detailed and sharpened at the front, but at the end it boils down to the basic info. Other than that it is AMAZING and i am pumped for the next chapter. You really have a way of making people want to read MORE, and the suspense is compleatly baffling. What i think would be cool is Kagome and Shessomaru forced to run away from Inyuyasha or someone else because they can't know about him training her or something like that. And then they confess their love, an epic battle scene occurs and they win and head home :D but thats only me. Whatever you do is fine, i don't know much about writing cause i'm only in gade 9. As long as i get another chapter SOON, cause I'm DYING here with all these cliffies! okay well, keep up the good work! bAi BaI~~ ^^