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| Shanna W.I. 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI think you could've went in detail about the shopping trip, but maybe it wasn't needed? I like how he came home and just missed the bed! Funny. |
| Arashi Maxwell 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. Five hours in the mall sounds horrible. Poor Reno...But I liked this story! |
| scarlettHuntress 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseyeah, shopping sucks sometimes. poor reno. short and uneventful but cute! |
| fivestarsellout 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abuseLOL cute! |