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Reviews For: The Horrors of the Mall

Shanna W.I.
2007-03-26
ch 1,
abuseI think you could've went in detail about the shopping trip, but maybe it wasn't needed? I like how he came home and just missed the bed! Funny.
Arashi Maxwell
2006-05-23
ch 1,
abuseWow. Five hours in the mall sounds horrible. Poor Reno...But I liked this story!
scarlettHuntress
2006-04-06
ch 1,
abuseyeah, shopping sucks sometimes. poor reno. short and uneventful but cute!
fivestarsellout
2006-02-08
ch 1,
abuseLOL

cute!
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