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| g2fan 2007-12-14 ch 22,  | abuseGreat chapter. Wendy |
| Leatah 2007-12-07 ch 22, | abuseIts been a long time...this was so cute...I really feel for Victoria...such a great story. Thanks |
| Leatah 2007-06-26 ch 21, | abuseits really good to see you writing again..this story really had some tense moments...glad to see things a little better now, can't wait to read more...thanks |
| lallyb1743 2007-06-04 ch 20, | abuseI liked it. |
| caseyswife 2007-03-21 ch 19, | abuseOoh... I hate that evil bastard Anglionby!! I just knew he would come up with some way to get back at Victoria. I thought that the session with the therapist was very well done - right on target and a very good way to bring the story together. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a bit - I have been in hospital and had other things happen recently. So very glad to be back and able to enjoy your story again! Thanks so much for your wonderful work!! |
| Leatah 2007-02-27 ch 19, | abuseGe I think I'm more excited about you going to Ireland than the story...my great grandpa came from there and couldn't speak English when he got here...um sorry I got carried away...Hey bring back a couple of leprachauns...:)...I hope someone kills what's his face, leave it to the scum to pull something like that...look forward to more...thanks |
| lallyb1743 2007-02-27 ch 19, | abuseI liked the first part--when they were in bed. |
| alex200 2007-02-04 ch 18, | abusePlease update soon. I like this story |
| lallyb1743 2007-02-04 ch 18, | abuseI liked the airport part. |
| g2fan 2007-01-18 ch 17, | abuseHI. Great story. I hope you updates real soon. Wendy |
| caseyswife 2006-12-27 ch 17, | abuseWhat a lovely wedding! Just so perfect... And twins for Bobby and Victoria?! Wonderful!! Ooh, I don't like this Doctor coming back on the scene, though... I hope Bobby can help Victoria make it through the trial and that their babies arrive safely... Great update and I look forward to more! |
| lallyb1743 2006-12-24 ch 17, | abuseI thought the wedding was really sweet. |
| lallyb1743 2006-11-27 ch 16, | abuseGlad you're back. Can't wait for the wedding and honeymoon. |
| Leatah 2006-11-26 ch 16, | abuseI enjoyed this chap...I kinda like the idea that Victoria has such a large family...The way her family made him welcome and seem to really like him...glad of that so now maybe Bobby will get over the feeling of being so alone...hope they both can survive "mom"s wedding...look forward to more...and by the way hope everything "medical" is going good for you...thanks |
| caseyswife 2006-10-14 ch 15, | abuseSorry, I have been in the hospital and haven't been able to be online alot during my recovery... I am glad that Bobby went to see Skoda to deal with all this - he needs just as much help as Victoria does. And I am so happy to see her getting back to her normal self and enjoying her pregnancy. Who wouldn't love carrying Baby Goren?? :) The only real thing that seems off is some of your grammar, but it is still great work and a terrific story! What happened to chapter 16? I saw a story alert about it when I got out of the hospital, but the link doesn't work and it is not here now...?!?! |