wa! cuteness! It was very nice... ^^

This is really good. I like the details and style.

I like the Mustang/Hawkeye pairing, so I thought this story was really sweet. You really brought out Hawkeye's brusque self confidence, and her influence over Roy Mustang. (Having him uncrumple the paper due to her presence shows that admirably)

Very cute ficlet!

^_^

I liked this. Not too long, not sappy, just... good. lol. XD

Neat. Haha, poor Havoc. Poor Roy, for that matter. Nicely done.
-Lilacs

Way too short, but sweet just the same. :)

It's OK - we forgive you cause it's a cute little ficlet! More, please!