Not bad ) The grammar was... well, it could have been MUCH better, but the story was alright )

This was one of the best fan fics I've ever read. Cute, funny, and just... very awesome! It was really sweet. And I let out an audible "Awwwww!" at the end. :)

aw i loved the last bit - that made me feel so happy and fuzzy -

preetty good! keep up the good work i loved the ending!

that was key-oot! i loved it, the ending was very sweet!

This was fantastic. You're a phenomenol writer, and you got Ayame and Hatori perfectly.

Im sorry. Im sorry. Ewan Mc Gregor!

EWAN MC GREGOR!

omg! i love him so much! He was so HOT! in Star Wars and in the Island. OMG! i was totally thrown off when you said that! I was like YAY! EWAN! HOORAY!

lol anyway as you've probably already figured out i am a bit crazy. lol. but that was just a fabulous one-shot my friend. just fabulous. i recently just finished the last episode of fruits baskets. (cause bleach and naruto and inuyasha and P.O.T kept catching me eye) but ..i cried like a baby. it was so sad/sweet. i loved it. but anyways! KUDOS TO YOU DUDE!

:d

omg too cute! i love it!

How wonderful.. How unbelievebly well-written. I simply adored it 3 Very very cute : 3 Ending was nice. . yeah .. :3

*T_T* _

Aw... that's very cute!

"Summer arrived early" best ending ever!

"Once again my winter was melt but this time,

Summer arrived early."

Such a sweet ending to a well written fic, I especially love the 'coniving' plot with both Miine and Hatori, and for some reason, this part

"His raged breath on my lips made me shiver. “Sneaky slithering bastard”

“All yours.” He answered hissing the last word like the serpent he was.

I kissed him."

Is like the best part, it's not only the realization, but it's a creative realization, and I can just SEE the expresions on their faces during this exchange, lol.

[clapping]

Wow my dear. That was fantastic. Heh. You can make love very well. Again, I loved it.

snake.

yup.

aya is the best. i actualy like hatori for his silent intensty, but ayame is so explosive and amazing thta i cant help but adore him too. !

and now 'cause of youre story, its an obsession.