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AlchemyGaara
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
You cursed on accident trying to spell 'shirt', XD, but me's likey.
Someone else wrote something with teh same idea (Ino jutsu, like 5 chapters) and i was thinking... why DOESN'T she do this!? it'll speed things along.

~Naomi
The Mad Empty Shell
2006-07-28 . chapter 1
XD Go ino, ya rock, MUHAHAHA! Thanks, it was really enjoyable!
yllom21
2006-07-23 . chapter 1
Interesting story, fantastic job! The last line was pretty good. The only concern I have is that you made Ino a little OC, but besides that its pretty good.
RandomTopic
2006-06-21 . chapter 1
I would like to know what Sasuke said when Naruto told him he didn't kiss him...

-Soelle
cookies worst nightmare
2006-04-07 . chapter 1
cute^^
narutogirl14
2006-02-20 . chapter 1
Man! Ino can realy get tiked can't she! I mean wow!
flyinghamster0fd00m
2006-02-19 . chapter 1
YES! YES! YES!
exrxr
2006-02-15 . chapter 1
hahaha. that was sweet and classic! it was good to read but...just a suggestion, could you include some kind of breaker or line-break when you're changing view points? it took me a few seconds to figure out that the view point had changed to ino at some point (coz i'm slow you know?).

and yes, definitely continue with your drabbles! i'd love to see more.
swtTom0-chan93
2006-02-11 . chapter 1
LOL it was funny, yet so sweet!
prettybeka
2006-02-11 . chapter 1
This story was really good. You should continue the drabbles?
Prozacfairy
2006-02-10 . chapter 1
Poor poor ino! :P
Shadow Kitsune67
2006-02-09 . chapter 1
LOL. HAHA. BAKA ONNA. XD ROFL. I LUFF IT! SASUNARU ALL THE WAY DAMMIT! =3
InsanityChaosDragon
2006-02-09 . chapter 1
*gushgushgushgushgushgushgush* Gahg... *falls "dead" foaming at the mouth* *squirms in "death" twitches at the floor*

Ky: ...I think she liked it. *sarcasm drips*

(The "death" thing is because you so declared that I wasn't allowed to die. So I mock died. So there.)
runicclover
2006-02-09 . chapter 1
Heck yeah! I love these little drabbles! They're so sweet! ^-^
Closing Trial
2006-02-08 . chapter 1
Oh yes! Please continue! It was so cute! I loved it! ^.^
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