oh my god i have just finished reading your story it was so unbelievalbly good. i think i almost cried in parts it was so sad but so good a lot better than some of the jack stories i've read. so yeah just wanted to say how much i loved the story. keep up the good work.

Nicely written. What a horrible life, and to have it cut short just when it was starting to go right - man, what a tragedy. The last line made me tear up, too. Thanks so much for this story!

Oh, my God. Absolutely haunting chapter.

I hate you by the way... I've read this story a few times and I cannot say how much I hate you for ending the story like you did! How could you kill Jack?!

I love this story so much and the first time I read it I sat staring at my screen, on the last page, just staring.. like what the f*uck!!

but... I like the story besides the end so every time I read it I stop right before 'it' happens!

... you know, just to let you know!

-shadow

All I can say is WOW and pass me the klennex. Well written, kept me gripped from beginning to end. Thank you for posting this little insight into Jack's past.

xJx

Great, great story. I loved it. You are a great writer.

love it

That was really great. I laughed, I cried (a lot). My favorite part however, where I ** laughed for ten minutes has to be...




“** A, I’m gonna grow out my side burns, have em all joined up like a biker” he grinned wickedly “It’s gonna be so cool, I’ll be like” he drew his fingers across his top lip and along his cheeks to meet up with sideburns “Yeah” he chuckled to himself.

Oh my god. I'm seriously gonna cry this story was so sad. I mean it was really good but I seriously gotta read something light and happy now. Oh my god it was good though.

That was an amazing story, great job :D

This was a wonderful story you did an excellent job... ive never read a better one on this site... Great job... you have my respect as a writer...

This is A great story! Really well written! Good work!!

this story was really brilliant. what is it about a young jackie that intrigues us so much?

anyway, loved this and speaking as another author who loves torturing the Mercer family, i get how hard it is to write all that stuff. although, maybe for different reasons, i certainly hope so anyway.

wow, mobid much, ignore me cause it's seriously bloody early and i probably shouldn't be insomnia-reviewing. great job on this story. i'm going to check out your other stuff.

c'est la meilleure fic que j'ai lue ici, je suis bluffée. je l'ai dévoré... Vous êtes parvenu si bien à décrire les choses, à utiliser les personnages... tout était si cohérent, c'était un vrai drame, mais sans jamais entré dans l'exagération ! WAOUH, je suis fan, ! j'ai vraiment aimé. FABULEUX ! MAGNIFIQUE !

Wow, IO dont even know what to say, That was one hell of a ride.
I cant even think of what to say, this fic was something I just quikly decided to read and it has turned out to be like the best story in this section. I love it so much but the only thing the matter with it was that the ending seemed a little rushed. please do not take that too harshly I just felt like there could have been more. I freakin loved it! LOVE IT
love and respect
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