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Shikabane-Mai 2008-02-07 ch 12,	abuseI'll be honest and say that I wasn't sure about reading this story at first. I've never read a Rysten fic before in my life, and I'm more of a Kandy or Carsten shipper, heh. Although, if Rysten was more popular, I'm pretty sure it'd rank in my top 3 as well. But anyway: After I read your first chapter, it's just like... Wow. Seriously. No words. I was immediately drawn into it. I loved how you wrote their interaction (in the 1st chap), and the underlying affection that was there. It was very alluring, and I absolutely LOVED it. As for the latest chapter: Heh, eventually someone would find out. I think Hailey was an excellent choice, and the way you built the suspense was awesome! And the ending? "Yeah, she knows." BAM! You left us off at that! Pretty please (with sugar on top) update as soon as possible? Or maybe write a new Rysten story about Season 3/4 where they have more scenes together? :)
Hermoine-Hermine 2007-06-11 ch 1,	abusei REAlly loove this fanfiction
CCS83 2007-05-17 ch 12,	abuseI just found this story recently and have been reading it when I had time. I love it so much and hope you can update soon!! You are a great writer!
28andoccrazy 2007-04-02 ch 12,	abuseI am so all about this story!! This is a relationship that I never thought I would enjoy so much. Please keep the chapters coming; I can't wait to see what Hailey's gonna do!
28andoccrazy 2007-04-02 ch 10,	abuseThis is so great!! Hooray for smut!
28andoccrazy 2007-04-01 ch 6,	abuseThis story is just great. I love Kirsten's repeated excused for not going to work. Priceless!! Can't wait to finish this story, it is really entertaining.
28andoccrazy 2007-04-01 ch 4,	abuseStill lovin it!!
28andoccrazy 2007-04-01 ch 1,	abuseThis is so hot!! When Sandy almost caught them, I think I was paralyzed with fear and this is just a fic!! I'm looking forward to the rest of this story!! A++
ocgirl.fr 2007-04-01 ch 12,	abuseHey, you should really update, I love your story. Udpate ASAP!
dirtyprettything 2007-03-13 ch 12,	abuseooh, ok though, i'm getting REALLY into this. when does everyone find out? I just can't get over that Ryan would do that, but... ooh, exciting story :)
dirtyprettything 2007-03-13 ch 2,	abusewow, Rysten, that's mad! Hm... let me take a second to adjust. The thing which keeps pervading my mind though is imagining Seth's reaction; "Dude, you slept with my MOM?!" It's beautifully written, and if anything was to turn me onto Rysten it would be this :p, unfortunately I'm staying a Ryan/Sether at heart.
drtyxlilxsecrtx 2007-03-13 ch 12,	abuseOMGOMGOMGOMG! i love love this fic so much. as you prolly know there arent many rysten fics out there (if you know of any more let me know!) but out of all the ones i have read this one is bar FAR the best i have ever read! i seriously mean that, i've read it like 3 times!! PLEASE UPDATE SON! i have to know what they are going to do about hailey! also i have this idea, have you ever read house of cards? its a kirsten/ryan fic also its really good, and how it ends just makes me beg for more becausee sandy finds out but i want to see how he confronts kirsten about it, so if you plan on him finding out in the future please the the whole controntation thing! UPDATE!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz 2007-03-13 ch 12,	abuseoh Hailey really well done chapter
kursk 2007-03-12 ch 12,	abuseFantastic chapter, I loved how they can´t keep their hands from each other, and I´m glad that hayley seems amused by them. Can´t wait for more.
xxocluvurxx 2007-03-12 ch 12,	abuseI was cracking up when Hailey was like I bet it was really satisfying. I don't know why but it was just funny. I love this story Update soon

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