Excellent character sketches, both chapters!

There are some authors (among whom you stand out) who are able to use dialogue - especially innocent-on-its-face dialogue, such as is presented here - to delve rather deeply into the psyche or motivations of the speakers. This is a wonderful example of that. You don't explain WHY Speedy had accompanied Raven in her quest of an antique book, leaving it up to us to fill in the blanks. But in the second chapter (a year later) they are very obviously comfortable in one another's presence. VERY comfortable. And yet, he can still do things that surprise her. Good on him.

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I was quite pleased with the way Speedy handled the flirts, by the way. Classic.

I liked it :) it was sweet, simple, and Interesting. Maybe you could string a ton of speedy/raven oneshots that are loosely related to each other?

Alright, so there are three reason why I am reviewing this:

1. I have an obsession with pair numbers, so I couln't stand that fucking 41. I know, I'm crazy xD.

2. I read this long, loooong time ago, but I didn't leave Review because I didn't have an account in that time and I didn't know how to leave anonymus reviews.

3. It's. So. Amazing. There, I said it.

The relationship between them has only been fun to me. They're always arguing, but not fighting. Just a funny and silly arguing. So awesome. And you explain it perfectly! It seems like everything you do is IC, really.

I hope you make another chapter for this story. It's totally unlikely considering that the second chapter was not planned, but I still have hopes :D

Byee :3

I think it's a great fic, not silly at all. Tell me, or publish or whatever, where you're gonna put that list, coz, if your judgement is as good as your writing, then I'll trust your subjectivity.

I'd be glad to read some more good fics WITH Raven, coz, I, as you,

accept her with several.

So, yeah, great fic again! Always love how you write.

I love the 2nd chapter almost as much as the first. Glad to see a characterisation of Speedy with brains. :D

wow, this is...i can't explain, please write this one some more!

very nicely done :] though my review is several months late, huh? 3

I liked it. :D It's a cute little snippet of their lives. I think I slightly prefer the first part, just because the conversation is a bit more engaging (I've noticed that quite a few fics were inspired by Alena-chan's challenge, especially the 'love is like chocolate' line), but the second part works well with it, and carries on the playful teasing side to their relationship. :)

Gr8 chapter! I absoulutely love your stories especially Raven/Speedy.

I LOVED IT

ROFLMAO. Oh my GOD, you watch Friends too? Hahaha, I thought I was the only one. xD

Well, in my opinion, the conversations did seem casual. Y'know, besides the point that most people wouldn't have the knowledge of Easter Day and what 'moot' actually means. (Hell, I didn't until now.)

Hm, never read Burn before.

I look forward to reading it. :)

(Which might be tomorrow because it's already 12 am)

In the beginong when there's the quote " forget love I want to fall in chocholate" I know who should say that! Owen from total drama island/action

Sorry to spam, but I just realized I don't HAVE to draw anything since Toboe LoneWolf has done a rather excellent job of illustrating in words the image I had in my head already in her one-shot Godiva (/s/3782477/1/Godiva).

Granted, it's not even from the same fandom, but Neji's bit near the end is just what I was picturing. (Probably subconcious association since I've read that oneshot before XD)

That was cute!

It was a bit like a buttercream chocolate to me: satisfying, smooth, and sweet, but lacking a bit of pizazz.

I personally would have thought it cute if the last truffle was split between them through a rather more.../direct/ way. Something along the lines of Roy holding it in his teeth and offering it for her to take a bite out of it. (This sounds a lot, lot, weirder than what it looks like in my head. I'm a visual person first and foremost who also happens to like well-written fanfics. So sue me ;P.)

If I doodle the scene I'm imagining, I'll add another review to this w/ my dA link to it :3

I love how Speedy had this goal in mind even though he seemed so lax. I feel like you MUST have your brains around when you're with Raven.

I wonder if this means they'll have a longstanding chocolate tradition on V Day? Robin might not be so happy! XD