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| Sk8er765 2006-06-29 ch 1, | abusesucks. it's too simple. |
| Aseret Kitsune 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful story. I think you captured Jimmy quite nicely. Hope you wouldn't mind me archiving this in my C2. |
| soulful-sin 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAw, so cute and angsty. Although I would have liked to see more, it's nice at its size now. :) |
| Flying Star * too...* 2006-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, the flipside of love. Trying to understand this foreign feeling, yet unable to do so. This fits Jimmy very well. Great job, so angsty. ^_^ |
| EL CHUPACABRA 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseMan, this will probably be me in ten years. Thanks a lot! Actually, I thought it different yet honest. Not all stories are happy. I'm surprised to see you write something for Jimmy Neutron. I first encountered your work in Hey Arnold. In any event, your writing style is still good and enjoyable, so hope you write for Jimmy a lot more. Take care. |
| AuroranWings 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseHm... the song that popped into my head when I read this 'All You Need is Love' (Beatles). Hmm. Strange. This was lovely and bittersweet. Because that's exactly what love is and can be. >_ |
| Readrbug21 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseAww..it's so sad! But if it wasn't Cindy, who was it? I liked this, and even if it was extremely short, it was lovely. How old was he in this, anyway? Again, this was lovely. -Samantha |
| acosta perez jose ramiro 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseWonderful description of Jimmy's feelings! Please, continue! Keep the good writing. |
| retroville9 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was cute. I liked it. |