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| nana 2008-06-12 ch 28, anon. | abuseslt j'adore ton histoire j'ai toujours voulu savoir ce qui se passerait si le programme d'elevage avait marcher! Pour des idee je propose que ben aille voire max et qu'il croit qu'il est le pere des jumaux...enfin c'est un exemple en tout cas plus de developement sur ben serait bien. |
| nena 2007-01-15 ch 16, anon. | abusefreakin ingenius! love it! it was smokin! i love the whole normal scene |
| jorie 2007-01-15 ch 15, anon. | abuseha funny! and unfortunately 4 the citizens of the u.s: too true |
| jorie 2007-01-15 ch 14, anon. | abusethanks for not killin off biggs... apart from cancelling the show that was the stupidest thing fox ever did...o wait n/m they kept logan alive :P well anyway that was awesome! |
| lola 2007-01-15 ch 7, anon. | abusezack in the picture? smokin! |
| garden-crafter 2006-09-30 ch 21, | abuseInteresting development .. it sounds like there's some sort of psychic link between the brothers |
| garden-crafter 2006-09-30 ch 14, | abuseI'm glad that Zack is playing overprotective-brother rather than being Alec's competition. |
| garden-crafter 2006-09-30 ch 9, | abusegreat chapter. I loved how you put in what they were THINKING as well as what they were saying. |
| garden-crafter 2006-09-30 ch 8, | abuseI'm thinking that it'll be funny when Alec finds out that Max is pregnant. |
| garden-crafter 2006-09-30 ch 5, | abuseI liked Alec showing up again. |
| garden-crafter 2006-09-30 ch 2, | abuseHm ...sounds like Max has a PLAN. Good story so far ! |
| garden-crafter 2006-09-30 ch 28, | abuseIf you got writer's block, then I hope you get over it soon. |
| PandylBas 2006-09-27 ch 28, | abuseHope you find a co-writer!! Such a great story! |
| mcmanusbaby90 2006-08-01 ch 28, | abuseI_Think_this_story_rox_I_have_An_idea_but_I_wont_give_it_till_im_I_Know_you_wanna_hear_it_I_really_would_like_to_continue_This_story_i_really_like_it_If_your_curious_about_my_Idea_Go_to_my_page_you_can_get_to_my_myspace_from_there!PLEAZ_CONTINUE! |
| synthera 2006-07-07 ch 18, anon. | abuse"Yes Princess, I can see that." Mole shot a look at Max. "You actually bred with this one? How much drugs did Manticore put you on?" This is my favorite line! And this chapter was too funny! |