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SendMoreParamedics
2008-02-28 . chapter 2
1 AND 2! He should play along till it like 'goes too far' or something, then shover them both, THEN realize he loves ash. But i dunno. I really hope its ash tho, I'm not a big misty fan by any stretch of means.
LitaKino77
2007-09-12 . chapter 2
OMG!!I LOVE IT!*Squeals*PLEAZ WRITE MORE I LOVE THIS STORY!1*Creams And Faints Cuz Shes Luvstuck by Shishi Stories*
C.Gholy
2007-05-19 . chapter 2
Cool Kasumi and Satoshi fighting over Shiogeru this is gonna get bitchy. Good so far I am hoping for a palletshipping ending
C.Gholy
2007-05-19 . chapter 1
I apoligise for the late review, I should have reviewd it at but I was banned from there.

Anyway Glad Kasumi and Satoshi split up. I adore love triangle fics I can tell this is gonna be interesting
MoonNight's Mystic
2007-02-20 . chapter 2
well i'm not really into love triangles but this fiction is interesting. grammar wasn't satisfactory. i don't wanna choose between the two of the options, i want satoshi and shigeru to be together. but i really want to see satoshi and kasumi to play dirty over shigeru thats a hell lot of fun. please update soon. and yeah lets pray for palletshippy to win.
ceruleanmisty
2006-12-15 . chapter 2
OH PLEASE MAKE IT GARYxMISTY!(ShigeruxKasumi)...anyways good fic!1
ASH LOVER GIRL
2006-11-29 . chapter 1
satoshi satoshi SATOSHI
The Shadows Hide All
2006-11-11 . chapter 2
Um, Umm...I don't know. I think...Number...3. Yeah. Because that is totally an answer. I can't decide. But great story nonetheless. :D
Michelicious
2006-02-23 . chapter 2
Loll Sorry fr the late review...:S It was a really good, enjoyable chapter...I like your story and the idea about Misty and Ash fighting for Gary it's just that you tend to ignore Ash's and Misty's good friendship, in fact theyre best friend maybe hed be more exciting if youd show that fact more :P but it is your idea sont bother me! :P HE can be a playboy... in fact he already is somehow!! We all love that macho Shigeru right?? so i dont mind which one but number 1 would be funnier (as long as it is egoshippy) nvm it doesnt matter that much well c ya!
~michelicious
Maia's Pen
2006-02-15 . chapter 2
Hey! I loved your lead! All the memories.. .. . it was so filled with emotions. *clutches heart* You also set up the scene really well.

0_0:- “HAKASE! WHERE IS SHIGERU?”-
Geeze, Sato! That loud mouth! Though, I guess I can’t blame him for getting frustrated. Heh.

Omg:- All that was in his mind was to have Shigeru for himself... forever.-
Greedy bum! No, Shigeru is mine. *tackles* I will only share him with Kasumi. . . and maybe with Midnight Mist. ~_^

*giggles*: -she wouldn’t mind exploring Shigeru anytime Again…bad thoughts Slaps to snap out.-
Haha, she rocks! I so agree! ~_^ That part was so entertaining! ^_^

OMG! OMG! He frigging declared WAR on her! OMG! I wanted to gag when he babbled:- I’m a champion and am not going to loose- BLAH! NO! Wa! Kick his butt Kasumi! Let the egoshipping prevail, lol!

Hm. . . I don’t think that Shigeru would care too terribly much about their feelings yet. .. maybe choice #2: He should shove both of them until he realizes his true love.

I just get a kick out of picturing Kasumi beating the crap out of Sato. Heh, I’m evil with a mean streak but anyone who reads WYB knows that, ehehheheheh.

Update!

Maia
Digital Warrior
2006-02-12 . chapter 1
SATOSHI SATOSHI SATOSHI GARY SHOULD PICK SATOSHI!! Good story but still GARY SHOULD PICK SATOSHI
Lili
2006-02-11 . chapter 1
woah, what an interesting plot...my vote is Kasumi cause we need more egoshippy ^_^. anyways keep up with the good work and update soon!
Slash_Fiend_Em
2006-02-11 . chapter 1
I want Shigeru to choose Satoshi. I don't like Shigeru/Kasumi, though as the author, it's your choice. Love it! Update soon!
cartoon moomba
2006-02-10 . chapter 1
Great story! I say GaryxMisty, since I am a Egooshippy fan xD
Michelicious
2006-02-09 . chapter 1
Hey this is a cute story and the first GAM i read that features Gary and not Misty. Are they boyfriend and girlfriend? Cuz they do kiss a lot for just 'friends'...:P hum you should check your story because i didn't understand some parts...:(
like you were forgetting words and im a foreigner so thats just complicated things @_@ loll but the story was good and the plot line seemed to be good as well ^_^
Update!! plz could you try to describe more cuz this story looks so cool, id like more details if possible...:S sorry...
id choose NUMBER ONE!(Kasumi)hehe but dont mind palletshipping Keep up the good work! :)
-Michelicious
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