Suddenly I am sad. :

I did really like this though, and it's a good thing you made me sad. xD That means it was good. Very vivid. Nice job.

W0W

that was so gripping it's like i was there and she was telling me the story . i know that it sound weird , but it does

Great use of metaphors. Good job.

that is so sweet

v.v. pretty and so sad. poor kagome.

Finally, an inuyasha story that i understand, lol. this was really good, i liked the general theme of it. great job!