please post chapter 5 soon... i like this story

Fantastic story. I absolutely love it. I wait patiently for an update.

This is a good plot, but the sentences need work.

" Is this a joke cried Elisabeth , if I marry him. We are through , the both of us."

That is hard to read. It should be this:

"Is this a joke?", cried Elisabeth, "If I marry him, we are through. The both of us."

Don't worry, I am just trying to help you. Please update soon!

Ooh this is getting good. I really like how it's turning out so far. There are barely any stories on here that get my attention..so please update soon.

EK! OMG I REALLY LIKE THIS! LYK HURRY UP AND POST NEXT CHAPPIE!

luv ya biatch

cya after midterm

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