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Reviews For: What Child is This? - Reviews: Page 1 of 7

ZUkoFlAmE
2008-07-08
ch 1,
abusewonderful story! Please update soon!
SzaharaTheSame
2008-06-23
ch 2,
abusesome serious conflict in this chapter, diturbing topics, shocking possibilities revealed...
yes, basically I loved this chapter, I was a bit shocked that Hiko was shocked, but that's a reasonable reaction
I'd really want to know why Kenshin is watching Hiko like that... I have there is more to it than what you gave away... maybe Hiko is just jumping to conclusions
it was wonderful how you implied that Kenshin understood without saying why Hiko wants to go into town

hm... did you know that this review is the 98th for a 2 chapter story... I mean *WOW* amazing, this story really deserves the attention
how about you celebrate the 100th review by surprizing us with a 3rd chapter, hm... what do you say? I think it would be heavenly :D
ya ne, STS
SzaharaTheSame
2008-06-23
ch 1,
abuseI don't know how many times I came back to read this story (maybe 10-15?) but I loved it every single time and I realized that I never reviewed... how can that be?

I don't know how to start listing the good things but I'll give it a go
I like that how you describe little Kenshin, he seems to have a relapse into his slave persona and a mild case of (almost) terror silence, but you also suggest that he's thinking about things in his head when he is watching Hiko
the beginning is so funny but turns pretty serious fast, it's nice to see that Kenshin did have some issues that were a challenge to solve
getting into Hiko's personality is difficult and here he looks so... so... Hiko (argh... I cannot find the best word)
and the last scene with the bath... ahem... I'm trying very hard not to drool on the keyboard... *laugh* appart from that, this is a great part with characterization and deep thoughts (and long dark hair unbound but that's deside the point)

haah... there... a nice review of decent length
ya ne, STS
animelover6326
2008-06-09
ch 2,
abuseOh! Wow! This is so interesting! Just have to love every word! Please continue! Please CONTINUE!

^_^
Krista
2008-05-30
ch 2, anon.
abuseohh my...you must UPDATE! You write so well and all of your stories are so interesting. Whats going to happen with little Kenshin? Is he really going to obey his shishou this time around? Or he going to let himself get shuffled around then later realize that he needs Hiko? GAH I must know! haha
Update soon plase :)
xShenx
2008-05-18
ch 2,
abuseAny chance for an update? because stroy is really interesting so far.
artist-girl731
2008-04-21
ch 2,
abusethis is awsome! please update soon!
!
freakyanimegal456
2008-03-20
ch 2,
abuseNO! HIKO-SAMA! DON'T MAKE KENSHIN LEAVE! T.T

Dang dude should've adopted Kenshin, not just 'raised' him. He pretty much is his dad, after all that...

UPDATE! n.n
Ju-Chan
2008-02-12
ch 2, anon.
abusewow, i know it's been a long time since the last update, but I really like to see you writing this story on :) I loved it so far... it's great how you describe Hikos inner feelings and his attitude towards young Kenshin... :)
catgrl106
2008-02-09
ch 1,
abuseAre you still planning on continuing this story? I have already reviewed the second chapter, or I would be asking from that one. I think this is a wonderful story, and I can't help but get a bit frustrated at the fact that you have yet to update it even though it's been almost a year. Therefore, I would like it if you wouldn't mind giving me a definite anwser of whether or not you still have plans for this story. Thanks!
iheartkenji
2007-12-15
ch 2,
abuseNo! You must update!!
ZUkoFlAmE
2007-12-15
ch 2,
abuseI love this story! I love how you portray the characters (especailly kenshin...poor kid...) please please please update! *adds to story alert* *adds to favorites*
anime-diva-40
2007-12-05
ch 2,
abuseYour an amazing writer! Keep it up! :)

~Kira~
WrittingPrincess9
2007-10-19
ch 2,
abuseThis is really awsome, i love it. PLEASE UPDATE
WP9 x
SassandraS
2007-10-15
ch 2,
abuseaw that's so sad
poor kenshin
but you should update
you've got a good story going so why the hell wait this long to update?
keep up the good work
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