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| Rebecca 2007-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh. Brilliant. You're very good. ;) |
| dddynamite 2006-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseThat's good really deep and emotional i liked it u should write more stories like this!! |
| Jolein 2006-02-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed this one. The fact that you let Danny get out his anger because of his fear of losing her is great. and Lindsay just wanted to be comforted was a nice touch |
| Dingbat142001 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseAW DAMN that was sweet but sad. He could have lost her AWW I love it how you had Danny force her to see the marks on her neck. Loved it! Fav line: “I’ve never been so scared in my whole life Lindsay.” 2)“Do you know how much it hurt me to see you in the hospital with these bruises on your neck.” Great job! |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. I loved it. I have never seen Danny so mad at Lindsay like that or even read it like that before. Please write more D/L stories. Brandy |
| chili-peppers 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseah that was really good that really touched me that did all he wanted to do was protect her and all she wanted him to do was comfort her i loved that well done ! |
| achingankle 2006-02-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful. thats all I have to say. I`m at a loss for words |
| passionate csi 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. Loved it! |
| Dybdahl 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abusethat could really have been a Danny thing to do |
| Elainhe 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseOh, I loved this ... can see him reacting that way too. To bring across such emotion in so few words - great! |
| icydroplets 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseWow, very emotional story! Great job, you wrote it very well. You can feel the connection between the two of them in your fics. :) |
| hogwartsalumni 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseHey good story or chapter (not sure if it's a one shot or not!) |
| Adamsgirl 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseaw... that was great! just a few mistakes buta ll in all, it rocked! :D |
| allstar12 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it, nice change of pace from the other stuff you've written - which I love too ;) If you need a bata to just check grammar and spelling and stuff, then I can if you want .. |
| MedicWarrickLvr 2006-02-09 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was absolutely phenomenal! I loved it! You did a great job and I could totally see Danny reacting that way! Excellent! |