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Reviews For: A brother's responsibility

LaurynHill
2006-08-09
ch 1,
abuseWow. This was pretty good. It was well written (which counts for half of the story); and the story itself was interesting. I like how Matt was comparing himself to Angemon and Tai, but the plot was rather...random. It was good, but I found myself lost in what was happening. I enjoyed reading this overall. Good job!
Gennai's Apprentice
2006-04-26
ch 1,
abuseWow, poor Matt, feeling so inadequate. What he needs is for TK to give him a good kick in the arse and tell him he IS important to him, more than Tai. Ah well, an interesting read as always.
Sweet Cari
2006-02-18
ch 1,
abuseA really good fanfic. I like it.
Eowyn the Fair
2006-02-16
ch 1,
abuseVery good story. It's a heavy burden being an older sibling, and I think you've done an absolutly wonderful job dramatizizing it for purposes of Matt and TK.
BenignUser
2006-02-12
ch 1,
abuseWonderful dramatization of how Yamato compares himself to Takeru's other guardians, in this case Taichi and Angemon.

It's interesting that Takeru's mother would have let him go investigate by himself, since by a few implications I'm assuming the setting is just after Adventure 01 ended. Just shows how much he's grown.

Fantastic piece.
Miss Anonymous hp
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuseThis was adorable! What a wonderful story! Keep up the good work. I hope you plan on doing more brotherly fics with these two--there just aren't enough of those in the fanfiction world today.
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