This was very good. I'll have to read the next one tomorrow when I get a chance.

There is so much information provided here and it all moves the action / plot forward in an easily understood manner.

Do you create the history and then decide where to weave the details or do you outline the story with the details?

I know you can't answer this even if you had time and access because I'm not signed in, but I'm not ready for that yet so I'll just have to imagine. *g*

An interesting twist to the Labyrinth Tale. And well written too.

The way you shift her longing is amazing.

The way you describe the goblins and how they came to be, and their origins showing through in the Ball room, is amazing.

I adore how you had Sarah and the horse come together. You wrote them so perfectly for each other!

I adore how you are crafting this story. The fact that he sees nothing but hatred radiating from her makes perfect sense, but is so rarely written.

Wonderful stuff.

When I first read that Sarah had become a firefighter, I had found it a little out of character. However, you explained it fantastically, and I'm very glad that you don't just glaze over that fact that Sarah has seen Labyrinth creates since her time in the Labyrinth. Also, the idea that the Labyrinth itself was made out of human dreams was brilliant and perfect. This story fits like a glove.

awe poor sarah

awe

my fav ch so far

oh no ..

yikes..in a goodway

k good ch

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