*Wipes tear away from eye* I think I was crying/laughing through the whole thing. Whatever it was, you got emotion from your reader, so as long as it's not anger, it's good!

I might have been crying because it was Remus and Sirius and I luffs them very much. (Separately, not into slash), and hate that Rowling killed them of.

Or I might have been laughing because it was damn right funny!

Either way, you got emotion from your reader, and as long as it's not anger, it's good!

Misfit

loved Moony's sarcasm. Heh.

Oh my great job, I love the Marauders :D

Teehee.

“If he did, I will personally reach up your ass and rip your spine out so I can beat you with it.”

“…Ouch.”

“Yes. And then you’d try to run away, but you’d just be sitting there, with no spine crying ‘No, Moony, no, I didn’t mean to lose the map! Stop beating me with my spine!’ and I’d just laugh and keep hitting you.”

Hehehe.. This Reminds me why I'm in love with Moony.

He's fracking hilarious

That was great.

I love the lines that are in the summary. They were so fantastic, and the way that Sirius asked if Remus had been putting a great deal of thought of how to kill him painfully was very funny as well.

I hope that you will have a good day!

hahhahahhah very funny, very good

Heh heh.

LMAO. That is all that i could possibly say!

hahahaha! that was awesome

I'm glad you posted it again, your humor pieces are priceless (as your pther fics too...). Nice job!

Dude, i'm still laughing! That was freakin' awesome! I loved the diologue (sp?) and how Remus was really angry. In fact, i loved the entire freakin' thing. Shot. D

Funny story, made me laugh. Thanks for writing.

You're as good with humour as you are with angst!

Favourite lines:

“Sorry, no. You should know I don’t make out with anyone on couches. That’s what everyone else does and Sirius Black is not everyone else.”

“Remus, you should know by now, I am the king of low.”

“If he did, I will personally reach up your ass and rip your spine out so I can beat you with it.”

“Yes. And then you’d try to run away, but you’d just be sitting there, with no spine crying ‘No, Moony, no, I didn’t mean to lose the map! Stop beating me with my spine!’ and I’d just laugh and keep hitting you.”

“You. Lost. The. Map.”

“Sirius-Fucking-Black, I am going to kill you.”

“Uh, my middle name is Orion, not Fucking.”

*favourites again*

- Gaby

FUnny! good job! how do they find it again?

HAHA THAT WAS SO FUNNY. No, seriously. It made me laugh out loud, and I don't do that when I'm reading unless it is really funny. Great job!

For an all-dialogue this was extremely descriptive...sprine through the ass, really?

haha, that gave me a great laugh though because i could just see the looks on their faces (yes Sirius, IN THE DARK) i was cracking up the whole time (granted i had to go to sleep and review it when i woke up, but still)

Good job on such an unusually good all-dialogue fic,

Paddy