 Feral Phoenix 2009-02-21 . chapter 1Drabbles ♥
It's short, but it has //impact//. I've seen this moment portrayed a million different ways (fanauthors love it to death), and I really like your version. It's soft and kind of sweet... if that makes any sense. Sora's stream-of-consciousness and Namine's honesty with herself really make the piece. |
 Mistress Gizzy (O SNAP) 2006-02-27 . chapter 1 Yhelothar! :D :D
I'm going to admit to this. I thought that was very nicely written. Even if I despise Kairi/Namine with all of my heart. It was nice.
"He remembers getting into arguments over who really found the pretty shell that ended up breaking anyways, and he remembers almost all of the scraped knees, bruises, and cuts." |