Oh thank you SO much for writing this! I thought it was perfect how you focused on the psychological and only mentioned the sex in passing; a lemon would have ruined this! I love Zelos and Kratos for the simple fact that they generate SO much angst. And you summed all of Zelos up in a short, beautifully worded snippet. Awesome job and keep writing the angst!

Very well written! I really like how you portrayed Zelos' inner feelings here. :) A bit sad, though that's okay.

Dude, I wanted to write something like this! Damn myself for being so slow to write!

I really like this! It flowed really nicely. I love how you wrote this, even if it was short (and I love short) it was powerful, it was intersting, it made me feel bad for Zelos all over again!

I have to add this to my favorites list, and I really hope you write more beautiful masterpieces like this! I will be waiting *snaps fingers and winks*

ZELOS MY BEAUTIFUL HUNNIE! DO NOT FEEL BAD, I AM HERE FOR YOU! *cries*