 Nobody 3/8/07 . chapter 8 Last one.I promise.WRITE MORE! |
 Nobody 3/8/07 . chapter 4 Just had to write another right away.You.made.Reno.So.cute!
He is now my favorite character because of you!
Thanx! |
 Nobody 3/8/07 . chapter 3 I Love Reno!
Oh and no offence,but,in "he ran his fingers threw her hair",Threw would be spelled through.just a tip.Its great Anyway! |
 jackie 7/9/06 . chapter 6 where are you in haunting ground maybe i can help i bet that game
KICKASS STORY |
 thatgirlsagenius 6/4/06 . chapter 5I love it! Please update...I |
 OccasionallyActive 3/26/06 . chapter 5Rockin story! |
 Starlight-Dagger 3/4/06 . chapter 4Woo! You updated! YAY! Good chapter!
She's Cloud's sister? Hmm! The plot thickens! |
 G.U.3.S.S 2/27/06 . chapter 3Well that's interesting... so far so good. But i think Reno's character is a little ooc, but other than that! Sugoi! (Awsome) Anyway would you mind putting up a description of Tira? You know... hair, eyes, height, etc. update soon! |
 Starlight-Dagger 2/17/06 . chapter 2You're doing great so far! Keep it up! |
 Tsu 2/10/06 . chapter 1 Wow!This is a great start to a story,I love your character,Tira.She's really cool.Please update soon! |
 Starlight-Dagger 2/10/06 . chapter 1M...I could be interesting.. the story has potential, it would be best if you focused on how your character had gotten where she was and just what exactly was going on in the next chapter. |