Lol I love the thought of Jin being a snake. Though I'm still wondering who he will fall for. He he keep up the good work!

Poor Jin, ridden with guilt, yet bound to honor the wish of a dying woman. This is spectacular!

Attention to all you whiney flamers recently out there who have nothing better to do than downgrade this story. How about you move on with your lives and stop wasting yours and mine with pointless reviews that don't help me or you?

I am sorry that you're so overwhelmed by pain and agony reading this story, but let me ask you something--what the hell are you doing reading it if it is that much of an eye-sore to you? How about you read something you actually like? I know! It is a far leap! But I thought I might point that out there seeing as your mind is stuck so far up your ass, you can't think of what to actually do! =D

Your reviews are nothing but flames--they are not helpful in any way and are just full of 5th grade, 'OMFNESS, THIS STORY SUX', and I have to say, I am tired of seeing them.

And by the way, the more you bitch at me, the more I will continue to write. =) You're not getting this story removed. You're not making me cry in a corner. You're making me just want to post the next chapter to piss you off more. LOL! XD

So how about you put on your big boy pants/girl panties, and go back to kindergarden where you came from and learn to type better crits for stories. Because none of your flames are helpful, and they'll just continued to be removed.

Thank you, and have a nice life or lack there of.

~Oreana

Very good Chapter. I am looking forward to the next one.

I quite like this story my only confusion is who Jin is going to be with. The summary says that he falls for a farm girl. I'm just excited for more romance and stuff, but I do like your story very much. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I enjoyed this story a lot! You're very creative, and you write well. One little critique, though: if this is set in medieval times, people wouldn't use words like "hi", "okay," or wear "jeans," as "hi" and "okay" are modern terms and denim wasn't invented until the 18th century. Still, I really loved this chapter!

Update quicker please! and Wind Knoll's Curse as well, I love these stories!

Periods. Suck.
Poor Jin, everyone wants so much from him!

Nya! I another wonderful great chapter! keep up the good work! Nya!

Oh dear, I feel really guilty for never leaving a review (though it's more of a comment than a review). I'm even more surprised that this story isn't bombarded with them. It's well written and unique with quite a twist! It's one of the most interesting YYH stories I've ever came across. I look forward to the next chapter!

Nya! I love your story! I hope you update soon, or whenever you have the time to. I love it! Nya!

AH! awesome! Poor Jin, so much to do.
Yay! Kurama got involved ^.^

Amazing story! ^^ You write so well!

thanks for up-dating. i love this story! Jin is such a cutie even as a snake :)

This is my favorit Jin story please up-date.