I bet it doesn't stay slow

Once again...great!

This would of been so cool if this had happened in the series- I can hear Janeway and Chakotay's voices. You have the characters pegged really well.

Great job! I love how Chakotay has to convince the Captain. The pairing is great!

G.S.1307

Very cute. I like it a lot.

I loved this story. I definatly think this is the way it should of happened.

dis is really cute x

2 strong personalities dealt with very well :)

Great story. Love the way you wrote the characters out of the corner the PTB put them at in Endgame.

aw!

that was brilliant; i can tell that you have really analysed each episode so that you can put all the parts of the puzzle together, making this feel like the episode that was never seen.

one word fits this: fantastic!

you have a perfect way of mixing your own ideas and on screen ideas, i wait for anything else you will write with anticipation!

that was so cute! aw... i like it when they end up together... :)