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Reviews For: The Fetennob Spell

dddynamite
2006-07-16
ch 1,
abuseHehe I loved it soo funny made me laugh alote!
The Turtle
2006-02-14
ch 1,
abuseHmm...I don't kno if you were just out of you element with this story or what, but this was a little lack luster for me. it wasn't bad, but it didn' wow me like all of your other ones. I wouldn't worry too much about it, though. You had some really good ideas with the spell and the Tweek. I want one of those. Anyways, good, but not great. It was a fun read, but that's about it.
MissRule
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuse-BWAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-

summary: *snickergigglesnort*
Elwing-Evenstar
2006-02-09
ch 1,
abuseHahahaha! This is FUNNY! Will there be more? I hope so! Awesome story!
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