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twilightgirl1590
2009-11-25 . chapter 38
awesome story. the dream thing was a little confusing at first untill i learned and began to nderstand the hermione being able to see the future with them . soo awesome job great work
natine
2009-09-18 . chapter 38
6 reviews? Nah..that's too perfect. I feel like I should do something about it. :D
So, two days later and I've finally finished reading this fic. The second one I've read from you. What should I say? I like that you don't rush into things. I like Sirius and Hermione, specially good smut scenes... even when I have to go to other pages to read them. But I really like how you write and plot your stories. How not everything is clear and the ending isn't obvious.
Yes. I did hope for a happy Hermione/Sirius ending. But Woman, did you make me wonder about that! No, I was never hoping that Snape would get his happy ending. Because, Snape is Snape and I can't see any fluf in him. But then the dreams and the "She would miss that" moment and I was actually believing you'd kill Sirius and the father of Hermione's children would be Harry. Yes! Harry!
That would be fine with me. although, I much prefer Sirius.
Ok, getting distracted here. To sum it up, I loved it. Best ever moments: ""The smile on Sirius’s face fell immediately, still holding his witch’s wrist, he added in a passive voice, “Oh good, Snape’s here. Let’s start the funeral.”" and "Knowing the history of the type of magical piece he held in his hand, Sirius Black should begin paying royalties to the wizard who developed it." Awesome! Now I'm off to read Necessary by the Order. Keep on writing!
Beijos!
siriuslives394
2009-08-15 . chapter 8
Fantastic story so far. (:
smileinaugust
2009-08-15 . chapter 38
I just spent the last few days reading this story and it was absolutely amazing! It's one of the best stories I've ever read, and even though you wrote it a while ago I just wanted to tell you how much I adored it! You captured all of the characters so well it didn't feel like a fanfiction at all. As long as you write you'll have a faithful reader in me. :)
lalala
2009-07-16 . chapter 14
Aw Sirius is such a sweetie . I think I'l get a puppy named Sirius. I mean, why not? Or maybe Snuffles. Totally Snuffles!
Keira-House M.D.
2009-07-03 . chapter 38
This is such an amazing story, I really loved it. You are a very talented writer and I hope you continue with more stories. I absolutely love this pairing. I also enjoyed your previous story, Necessary by the order.
Keep writing
Celina Corey
2009-06-06 . chapter 38
I just wanted to say that I absolutely enjoyed this story. It took me all of 2 weeks at the most to read, and I fell in love with it. I just literally finished the last sentence. I wanted to leave you a review telling you of my appreciation(sp?) for the well written language of this story. It was all very believable and I must admit that at one point, I was in tears. Thank you so much for writing this touching story.
Much Love,
Celina Corey
kit //.^
2009-05-22 . chapter 37
this has got to be my favorite chapter! you're awesome!!
sLOVEnia27
2009-05-07 . chapter 16
oh Tonks and Remus' little slip was priceless. LMAO. Nice. :)
sLOVEnia27
2009-05-07 . chapter 12
I cannot believe Sirius can be this stupid. Sigh.
sLOVEnia27
2009-05-07 . chapter 9
All that to be be discovered because of some lipstick on his chin. Well I guess it's true that it's the little things that count. Haha.
sLOVEnia27
2009-05-07 . chapter 8
Women hate arrogant ** like Sirius Black. But secretly, we love them. Haha.
sLOVEnia27
2009-05-07 . chapter 6
Curse you, dear author, for ruining that near-perfect moment. Harry always has bad timing.
sLOVEnia27
2009-05-06 . chapter 4
Love that poem. I don't think it was too much at all.
sLOVEnia27
2009-05-06 . chapter 3
“Ah, I just need to get laid and everything will sort itself out.”
Ha ha ha best line. The old Sirius we know and love.
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