This is a definite change from stories I generally read: the whole thing flows together in a very sweet, mellow way. Yet at the same time, the story doesn't fall into any sort of dullness. It makes for a very nice one-shot! Well written without the need for intense drama or angst; just a sweet moment between lovers. x3

I love it. I think it is hard writing yuki and shu's personality. I get irritated when people make him sound stupid. But you didn't and I appreciate it. Hm...Yuki I like how he is portrayed. I find that this is something I think he would act like. Great Job, hope to keep reading from you ^__^

Aw. *pushes them into each other* :P

Nice. :)

This was such a sweet oneshot! I love how Yuki was humming the song without realizing it. I do that all the time and people just get annoyed with me. -_-;; Nope, they never stare at me lovingly, just a glare and a "shut up." I feel so loved. T.T Lol. But I really did think this was sweet. If only Yuki wasn't so stubborn about showing affection! :Sigh: But, I guess that's part of the appeal. Well, great job! Loved it!

Hey!...lol...a real nice piece. really simple n all but definitely not without a touch of sweetness dat juz makes me wish for more! really nice writtin style...hope u'll write more of this pairing in d future...will definitely b lookin forward 2 ur piece or art!

This was such a nice read. The perfect short fic. Shuichi is so adorable in it. I love how he makes the concious effort to act more calm. It's a more mature Shuichi. I love Yuki humming one of Bad Luck's song. It would be a wonderful thing for Shuichi to hear.
Also lovely descriptions of the weather. Much love.

Beautifully done, nicely mellow. One of my favorite lines here: "It was an excuse for Shuichi to bring Yuki green tea..." :) A simple sentence that speaks volumes for Shuichi's feelings and the relationship they share.

I've yet to watch past the first two episodes of Gravitation, but from what I know of their characters so far, Shuichi's quite hyperactive and should probably do some work in the self-control department. Good to see here that he does exactly that. Very telling that he restrains himself on behalf of Yuki.

A very sweet one-shot, Shuichi and Yuki beautifully adapted from the anime (or perhaps manga, I wouldn't know).

Oh, how cute! I really like this. Very well-written.

Utterly adorable.

aw... how cute! Eiri humming! and humming a Bad Luck tune no less...

I loved the last sentence. You've made a winner. Simple and clean, but sometimes...simple stories are the greatest. A knock-out job.

good, very good

10 OUT OF 10 FOR CUTENESS! when reading this it seriously made me goo AW!! haha LOVED IT! :] GREAT JOB!

Aw! How adorably silent and sweet, almost too innocent... Will there be more? D: