Ummm... Isn't this a dramione? Cuz I don't see Dudley in this at all or even anyone else talking other that Draco and hermione. You should probably change the Dudley thing if you want more reviews for your story. Usually I don't read any other Harry potter fanfic unless it is a dramione. They are surprisingly popular. Besides all that, It was great!

That was so touching! I loved this so much :)

That was a really honest and heart melting dramione, well done. U captured draco perfectly and I've never really fell for a one shot before ;p

It seems as though I love everything you write. Your so good at writing Draco's POV

I love this. I love Draco's inner monologue. I feel like you absolutely nailed his character. Beautifully written and touching.

The internal monologue you have written for Draco is so good, so evocative of his character. You captured his shifting emotions beautifully. This is a great story that I know more people would find and enjoy if it were categorized correctly. You've listed the main characters as Hermione and Dudley rather than Draco. Those fanfic lovers of Dramione will not find it unless they happen upon it by mistake, as I did. You may want to update that and re-publish it. Thanks for a delightful read.

Aww this was rather fluffy and cute

Perfect story. But to beat to the dead horse down, you may want to change your pairing Dudley to Draco

How incredibly sweet and wonderful! Love it! Just a heads up, though, your pairing is listed under "Dudley" instead of "Draco." May want to fix it.

Amazing job!

Hi, nice little story. Might want to look at your pairing again, though! Hermione and Dudley seems quite impossible!

Absolutely love this! I was just scrolling through random pairings, and thought that a Hermione/Dudley fanfic might be fun to read. But this story comes, up and being a huuuuge Dramione fan I thought I'd check it out since Draco's name was part of the summary. But happy enough to find that it's a Dramione fanfic.

I hope you can change it to the correct pairing, so it is available for more Dramione fans, because this is just so fantastic! (:

Uh I think you got the wrong pairing you put dudly instead of draco. But its still a really good story! And so Draco too!

Awww! Adorable!

I thought this was just perfect

hey, so you accidentally have this set as dudley/hermione, rather than draco/hermione. can you please fix it? otherwise fewer people will find the amazingly sweet, romantic, beautiful confection of words you have created. and that would be a shame.