AH I loved his view. I don't care if it wouldn't have worked, it still woulda been great to see them in love XD

as for her pov...WOAH did NOT see that coming XD I didn't realize it was the day after XD maybe a week I thought XD haha that was a shocker... if only she knew that smile was for her XD..er.. because of her actually XD

gah her thoughts are my own. If only if only he could have stayed the man and not the killer. And I saw that same expression on his face when he saw the scar. XD... :/ and then turned to anger...

Except I don't see how you can love in a day...

OOH! the "I'm sorry Leese" woulda been SO cool it if were his ghost XD if it were (and this were a story dealing with magic or something that would make it acceptable to have a ghost chp...then again... it would probably still be...) you shoulda wrote a chp where his ghost is watching her at the funeral XD that woulda been fun XD but alas, this is okay too XD

psh. it SO could have worked... psh... (well, we all know we WISh it coulda XD )

AH! I loved them together in the movie and I was SO sad he had to die. He SO should have kissed her at least ONCE. if only if only there was AU. blah. oh well XD I love that she's his equal and wants no one else to have her XD I'm okay with that XD... if only he lived ... *sigh* X(

You really know how to make a person cry, don't you? Anywho, the story in itself is wonderful and you should keep on writing.

I really liked both stories, a bit sad, but both beautiful written. I could litterally feel the emotions coming off the pages.

Hopefully the last chapter to Inevitable will be up by Sunday at the earliest, but no promises.

omg i was about to cry...you are a wonderful writer and i was able to visualize all of that happening. i am going to save this under my favoites

hey! i loved both of them. they great work, i liked the way you highlighted the different feelings between! great job! :)