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| minniequill 2007-01-28 ch 2, | abuseWhy'd you stop?! This is intriguing and well-written to boot! |
| homeric 2006-08-24 ch 2, | abuseThis is a lovely fic. I really like the way that you've written Minerva - there are so many questions regarding her background that it's refreshing to find a fic with her as the protaganist. I hope that you continue with it, I for one will definately be reading it. |
| ScM15 2006-03-13 ch 2, | abuseHmm, very interesting. You're right, I don't think I've come across many stories from Minerva's perspective, and none that really touch on her childhood. I'll be looking forward to the rest. -Scott |
| Abbey Eileen 2006-03-13 ch 2, | abuseI like this side of Moody... and Potter? I actually believe the Potters might've been dark, and I think it's funny that a dark family gave birth to Harry, the "good" boywholived. Evil and Good have such vague boundaries, sometimes, though... |
| Abbey Eileen 2006-03-13 ch 1, | abuseYou're right on about that tartan robe thing... I mean, REALLY! |
| Climber 2006-03-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is really good, you write amazingly! Charlus Potter? James' relative? I like Moody punching him, it's just like him, stupidly plucky. Climber |
| Leta McGotor 2006-02-19 ch 2, | abuseStrange parents, they would haven driven me up the wall. I wonder why they call Alastor acripple, too, because if you mean the same Alastor I think about, he can't be a cripple. I mean he was an Auror, wasn't he, and they take only the best ones. I hope you explain that with the cripple. |
| Hestia Hesperus 2006-02-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis was brilliantly well done! I am absolutely in love with the way you write! Reminds me a bit of my own style (you can go ahead and check me out, I have a few one-shots and a story). I adore the ideas that go around in your head as well! It is totally original! I just wish that you could have gotten more reviews! I've never read a fic about MM, by the way. I really do love her character and wish that JKR could give her more justice! Please keep writing no matter the hardships! You are really very good! I look forward to keeping up with this story! Of course there are a few faults (some of the magical spelling is a tad off, like the name Filch in your review reply, and the name Pensieve...just look the names up in the books if you aren't sure about something), but they are practically non-existant compared to thousand others on Good work! And best of luck on the upcoming chapters! I shall be reviewing again, but until then...Cheers! Signed, Hestia Hesperus, Author of 'The Witching Hour', 'Once Upon a Rosier Christmas', 'Of Mugwumps and Toadstools', and 'Things That Go Bump In The Night' |
| Possum132 2006-02-18 ch 2, | abuseProto-feminist Minerva, one-legged Moody - this is interesting! |
| harrypottermagic32 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseNice start! So many of the characters in the Harry Potter series obviously have their own lives and their own stories. They're all so complex that I think it's a great thing that fanfiction even exists so us authors can take advantage of that. |
| Possum132 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseLooking forward to seeing Moody - soon! Minerva played for the Wimbourne Wasps in my fics, will she have a team in this? And did she give Filch his tartan scarf? |
| Leta McGotor 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI have indeed wondered about a few things you mentioned at the beginning myself, but I never asked where she got her tartan bathrobe. Anyway, keep writing. |