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| Sonny Jim 2006-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseSmashing, simply smashing. Very elegant and graceful writing - it was almost too much. I almost started crying. The only thing this needs more of is Fu-So-Ya, the hottest man alive. |
| ryonan girl 2006-03-01 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Beautiful one shot. You're probably the best writer for the pairing in Your portrayal of the Rydia and Kain amazes me. Nice work! |
| angie 2006-02-14 ch 1, anon. | abusei love it, its original and reminds me of the game(on gameboy advanced) it has a GREAT ending. peace |
| The Tiramisu Of Impending D... 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseA very sweet little redemption fic. And Rydia X Kain, representin'! Heheheh. Very pleasant to read how he gained a decent night's rest after having difficulties before, and then the interaction between Bahamut and Kain was pretty awesome. And Kain. . . glad he moved on from Rosa. I don't mind the liberties you took with the Lunar Ruins. Won't be **. Thanks for writing this! You inspire me! |
| Reddo Meijisu 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseIf I'm "squicky," as you put it, then so be it. ^^; Truthfully, I'm not a fan of either "ship," but I like reading FFIV fics nonetheless... That aside, I think that this was a nicely crafted story from the game's AU, and a good start to the pairing itself. Creative liberties are nice once in awhile, and this story makes the most of it in great manner. Very nice! |
| Desert Lynx 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is awesome! :) |