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Deadlyblossom-2995
2009-11-24 . chapter 3
plz tell meh ur gonna write more
StrawberryBlossom-Chan
2009-06-15 . chapter 2
lol i can see why neji(sp i dont feel like scrolling up to find out lol) would come(shudders), left alone with gai and lee and no sane teamate(shudders) scary, lol.) lol nejis pros and cons are so funny.
-MoonxStar-
2009-04-11 . chapter 3
T.T I wanted hinata to be with gaara, oh well, cool story by the way
firequeen07
2009-03-22 . chapter 3
Hey there! When are you gonna update again? your story's so good I'm itching for more.:)
kallou
2009-03-16 . chapter 3
plz update it been like 3 yrs?
TheTragicFlaw
2009-02-17 . chapter 1
You are a comic genius! And a good writer to boot! lol I laughed my ass off, especially when Gaara was glaring at those girls and they were laughing at him.
"I refuse to be funny!"
Neko4
2008-09-15 . chapter 3
wat going to happen next
Lady of Dreams and Nightmares
2008-08-29 . chapter 3
LOL, NYA!!

Update soon, nya??
Okuyukashii
2008-08-08 . chapter 3
I love it, this is so funny! There were a lot of hilarious lines! I especially like the list that Temari wrote. Great job! I hope you update this, you must be able to after 2 years, right? :)
mewantpancake
2008-07-24 . chapter 3
please update soon
OragamiBeauty
2008-07-02 . chapter 3
Hehehe. Loved it. GaaSaku rocks my proverbial socks. Update soon,please?
-Puddle of rain
2008-06-20 . chapter 1
oh dear. gaara learned the discoveries of girls.
RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! haha im jk.
funny so far. imma continuing reading! MUWAHHAHAHAHAHA-chokes-
- apathetic.
Kinky-Nami-Lass
2008-06-14 . chapter 3
HAHA!too many funny parts! love this so much! really i do! please update it... it seems a shame since it is part of only a few which made me laugh out loud...
Kinky-Nami-Lass
2008-06-14 . chapter 2
Haha favourites again!:

Could it be... Temari was the reincarnate of the devil?-!

Pros:
-She's a girl.
-Hyuga, cool white eyes

HAHA:
Hyuga Neji
Pros
-Pretty hair and eyes
-Hyuga prodigy
-Could look like a girl...
Cons
-A guy
-No kids
-End Sabaku line
-A guy
-Voted most likely to kill you in you sleep (of the girls/other guests) if you ever slept
-Is a guy

"Why is Hyuga Neji on this list?"

Gaara turned around and almost screamed if he wasn't a kazekage with a reputation to uphold.

"What do you mean, no guys?" Kankurou said, looking all offended.

What do you mean, no guys?" Neji echoed Kankurou, looking even more so offended.

"No. Neji's a guy, no matter how bishified he is."
Kinky-Nami-Lass
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
This was hilarious! I love it! Okay okay... my favourite lines in the first chapter were:

"Now, Gaara, that's not nice. Kankurou's not fat. His nose is just wide. He looks fat, but he isn't..."

"Eh, only a Hyuga can glare at three people at once,"

"Neji, I know that in the ad, it said, 'females prefered', but when I wrote 'prefered', I meant, 'anyone-who-is-not-a-girl-is-therefore-excluded'."

"'Something' Tenten?"

"...So you invited these 'strangers' (whom we just happen to know) into our house,"

"Okay... one: there are only five available girls in Konoha?"

"Fine. Two: you do realize that there's a guy in there, right?"

"Aren't you a bit old for the 'girls-are-icky' stage?"

"Dude...I wish girls 'made fun of' me like that..."

Gaara couldn't care less how many letters Temari would send to the Hokage of Konoha, but... cream? In his coffee? No! He would not stand for that!
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