I think the story is great, but it moved too fast in the beginning and too confusing in the end. It didn't have enough description and the chapters weren't even in words. All in all, it was a great plot and wonderful story.

AWW! Sugary sweet! But in a good way! Fab story love the characters!
Kitty

I like this story.
It's a good one.
I loved how Harry and Severus got together... it's something different to read.

That was amazing.

What a wonderful tale! The ending is so sad, but I love how you go into detale about what happened hundred of years down the road. Forever is a long time. Well writen, and Thank you for finishing your story!

KCK-Lumcer

this is bauty7890102 I moved to this account because I check almost every day.

This was a great story.

This is such a beautiful story!

you actualy made me cry. its not often a story can do that to me. a very good story well done. i hope you write more soon

i love what you did here. they deserve all they got the bastards treating harry that way. do you know ive read almost all your stroys today

being immortal is the dream of manhood, but noone really knows what great price it comes with, -Novera Roihan

anyways, it was a great story, keep up all ur hard work!

great story

its safe to say...that was...amazin
peace out
alex

this was a great story

i really liked this story. its by far one of the better severus/harry stories that i have gotten to read.

Personally I love stories where the Dursley's get what they had comming. No clue why people seemed to over look the fact that what harry went through in the books was still abuse. Sigh* To tell the truth...They deserved so much more done to them. I would not have punished Dudley in such a manner. Stating the fact that it is not his fault for being born with parents who were cruel and taught him to be just the same. He knew of nothing else, so I could not blame him for being like such. I'm glad that vernon did not die. He doesn't deserve death, if anything I would make sure he lived forever with the guilt he had. I would also cast a version of the spell you wrote with a few...minor changes. For instance not only would he feel harry's pain, but he would feel the pain of all rape victims. Maybe he will realize...I dunno...maybe that it is wrong I guess. Or he would be sickened at least by the actions of people like him who have done worse...or the actions of people who become monsters. Shrugs* Petunia, is the prime example of what happens when envy and sloth takes over. I would LOVE to have cast a hex on her that allowed her eyes to cross, and her nose to shove itself up her arse. Then again...that would make me like them...But its a nice creative outlet don't you think?

lol Anyways I love the way your story starts out I hope harry finds happiness. He deserves it, but I think that it would be even better if he actually accepted that he does. Sometimes saying doesn't lead to believing it. Hope Severus and Harry get along well. I hate Ron and Dumbles but I guess I will put up with Albus. I hope there is ron and ginny bashing...I really don't like them. Ron is a very fickle freind.