Glad to see this story has been updated. I too was a bit disappointed by Yamibou's ending. It would have been nice if the anime's producers had allowed for something to develop between Lilith and Hazuki. From the events at the end of episode 11, you could tell that Hazuki had developed a certain fondness for Lilith. Your story is one of a very few I've seen that allows for that to happen. Hazuki and Lilith are very in character, though Hazuki's amorous feelings seem to be finding themselves a new target (snicker). There is just the right amount of action and it is always amusing to see Hazuki defeat waves of enemies and yet not really understand how she is able to do so.

I hope the next chapter comes out alot sooner. Overall though, this is a excellent story. I hope to see it continue.

P.S. - I couldn't help but note that in the first part of H&L's Hellsing foray it was mentioned that they had already visited six bookworlds before then. Would you consider ellaborating on those trips. Personally, I'd like to see H&L visit the Naruto world, preferably around the Wave country incident through the chunin exams. You could have Sakura turn her feelings from Sasuke to Hazuki (it would fit in with the theme of Hazuki unintentionally attracting admirerers whereever she goes) and it would be interesting to see how our dynamic duo handle situations such as Zabuza and the Sand/Sound invasion.

I really enjoyed reading this fic so far.
I'm looking forward to reading more! ^^

Update please!!

sick!! -good way ;)- cant wait hehehe till den bye!!

this is a VERY interesting story. I hope you update soon even though you probably can't a girl can hope can't she? anyway I have read some of your fanfics and most are really good. Keep it up because there are not enough good fanfiction writers.

Oh? This is an interesting storyline. You might want to get rid of the 'complete' thingy though. It's a bit misleading. I'm glad you decided to continue this.

Hi again!

I just noticed a problem before I got to read this one.

Part two? Something's gone wrong. You might have posted this new one over the old one...

I'll review it again, once things are fixed, okay?

Sincerely,
writer-jm

hellsing crossover eh? ^_^ me liky.

I'm not familiar with the anime but since you wrote it, I decided to try it anyway. And I was not disappointed. The story was descriptive enough to follow and even enjoy without any outside knowledge.

Teresas

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!

Cute. It's a neat idea and I like this ending.

I hate the anime ending totally... But your fic is great... Write more!

Yep, I liked that anime, even though it was quite confusing... and I hated the stupidity of the end... Update soon !