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| Maijril 2008-05-08 ch 24, | abuseA few things. First, I'd like to say that I've enjoyed this story so far, although Ranma annoyed me in this chapter. Why is it when any Hero-type person goes through grief, it is always shown the same way. On another note, I hope that All of the Rei clones don't get destroyed like in an extremely large amount of fanfiction. |
| Kapola Nuva 2008-02-01 ch 42, | abuseAMAZING! Though it lacks details, i think that mostly enhances the story. personally i hate details. some people get so wraped up in them, i nod off in the middle of the story. upps went off tract for a sec. anyways i'm really enjoying the story. the having "ranma" die, but replaced with an angel by 'convincing' genma it was a miracle cure was a great.. um.. would it be called an addon or a part or something? anyway that was cool. the hiro sheton ha (no, i can't spell. but i dont care, :P) caught me off guard until i heard the spiral part. that was well done, lol. anyways, DONT LET THIS STORY DIE! OR I'LL HUNT YOU TO THE ENDS OF THE EARTH AND THROUGH MULTIPLE DIMENSIONS AND ... um... do really mean and scary stuff that... encourages you to write more and finish your story! yaa.. thats what i was trying to say.. ok some giving me that weird look. its late and i aint thinking clearly, lol. anyways, dont let this story die! |
| god of all 2008-01-13 ch 42, | abuseplece right more really grat story |
| Slade13 2008-01-04 ch 42, | abuseheh, finally got around to reading this one again... this is not the real 'end' is it... because i would be quite cross with you if it was. :3 anyhoo, another nice chapter. though it was short, it was fun to read. now the question is: what's next? keep up the great work, buddy! till next... |
| mythicalprogrammer 2007-12-20 ch 2, anon. | abusedude... I refer to them as holy ** handles too. LOL. I was sitting in the middle sit and was holding the two handles while my friend drift. >,> |
| t-dugong 2007-11-22 ch 42, | abuseer...you're saying 300 degree celcius, right? |
| dogbertcarroll 2007-11-12 ch 42, | abuse*snicker* That's one way to disperse an angel. I can't imagine the amount of damage the storm would cause tho'. |
| dogbertcarroll 2007-11-12 ch 37, | abuseThe bit about only having one body available only counts if there was actually one body to begin with. Ranma and Yui were both absorbed by 01 at different times leaving nothing but LCL and clothes behind. |
| ranma hibiki 2007-10-25 ch 42, | abuseawesome!! xD |
| keichan2 2007-10-12 ch 42, | abuseThanks for the new chapter! (and sorry to be late for the review...) I must say that I'm happy you didn't wait for the next chapter to finish the battle! On the other hand, I have a hard time understanding why Ranma didn't wake up in the infirmary... Please update soon! |
| Materia-Blade 2007-10-10 ch 42, | abuseI knew I'd be annoyed if i read this. I shoulda waited till you had a follow up chapter! Dammitall! |
| Alex Ultra 2007-10-10 ch 42, | abuseYay! I'm so glad to see you're not dead! And the crash doesn't sound good. :( I'm so sorry to hear that. ... so did you make the move to Linux then? *big-grin* Very good (pair of) chapter(s), as usual, if a bit short per chapter (trouble with .txt files you say? I usually convert them to html files so I wouldn't know, and honestly with the way ffn handles files et-al you're pretty brave using .txt XD). I couldn't find any spelling errors, either, so you seem to have done pretty well. ^_^? Cya later! Alex Ultra: Violence Pacified LATER |
| Upgrade 2007-10-09 ch 42, | abuseHiryuu Shouten Haa, Eva sized. I like it. |
| James Axelrad 2007-10-09 ch 42, | abusegreat chapter. maybe i need to send you stuff more often;) |
| Alamandorious 2007-10-09 ch 42, anon. | abuseNicely done, although a bit short for my tastes. Still, your writing improves with every chapter, and the story just keeps getting better and better. Please keep it up ^^ |