loved it. very well done. you should think sequel, i would read it.

Best lines: Sam had unabashedly encouraged it... Janet had just grinned and asked him if it meant he would get injured less.\

Pity about the implied Sam/Jack (a truly implausible long-term ship) but well written.

Ya, thats what we like.

Lol, :)

How sweet...I love Dan/Jan fics, and this one looks off to a promising start. Please, continue soon--I'm intrigued.

AWW!! The part between Cassie and Janet started to make me cry! It was so sweet!

Good beginning but it leaves me longing for more. Like thats a bad thing. Keep up the good work.

NO NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO! NO NO

You can't END it here! Continue! Cointinue! PLEASE! *whimpers* I'm not adverse to begging...

I like it, wish it were really that way. Nice work.

Hey, this is good. I miss Janet a lot. Hope there will be lots of love for Janet and Daniel...oh, and for Jack and Sam, of course :) Nice you remembered Cassie, most of the people forgot her. I think if Janet would come back, she would be asking about Cassie first. Update soon, I´ll be waiting. -Lia

very good job. good characterization.

This is it? :D Oh, come on now, you could do more. At least one more chapter? Please?