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blackrose-sama
2009-10-18 . chapter 4
omg i love it
please please update
o and one question does sora's mom already no about the plan
anonymous
2009-04-27 . chapter 4
i really hope you update this soon!! you got me all curious and I want to see how it all turns out! x3
shy maxi
2009-03-24 . chapter 4
Bwahaha I love it. Sora acting seductive to get back at Riku.
Hope you update soon~
Before-I-Fall
2009-01-10 . chapter 4
Oh this is just hilarious! Sure, I kind of hate Riku for breaking up with sora . . . but seeing as just about everyones out to get him, or trying to force him to get back together with sora, I kind of feel bad for him! And sora's just the cutest thing, trying to act all mature and such, when he's obviously not. But he does have that seductive side to him that's probably murdering Riku right about now. I love how in this chapter, Selphie was so obvious in her attempt to get Riku to see Sora, but she was just asking all these annoying questions and taunting him. I also like how you characterized Sora's mom, kyoko ( Like the name, by the way ) and how it seems like shes trying to get them back together too! This story is cute, funny, realistic ( in a way ) and very interesting. Can't wait to fnd out what happens next!
xXxSmidgexXx
2008-12-30 . chapter 4
where is the continguiness >
uneasyness.rocks
2008-12-28 . chapter 4
Hey there darling(: Well, constructive criticism, here it is...
I really like the story, I personally find myself really enjoying the plot because, well, you keep popping new things in and actually explaining things; hence why I am still reading this and am not lost.
I really like the plot and the way you write it because you really make Sora act the way he would if he was stuck in such situation.
Looking forward for the next chapter.
Keep writing darling(:
Soffieeh.
EnvyChild
2008-12-27 . chapter 2
You are making me give up hope in this story, I wish you would write another chapter or two. That would be very nice of you.
xXFlamingPyroPunkXx
2008-10-05 . chapter 4
this is awesome
' oh sweet jesus
2008-07-19 . chapter 4
UPPDDATE
StefanXSorenForever
2008-07-11 . chapter 4
Dangit you HAVE to update! Please...*puppy eyes*
Yuffie's Ninja Insanity
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
You should definitly finish this!
Flame-Wolf-89
2008-06-20 . chapter 4
Update soon, I demand it! It's too good to not be continued.
Zume Rokkata
2008-04-11 . chapter 4
This is funny and cute and wonderful! I want more!
West24
2008-04-06 . chapter 3
heh heh...Dude..Heh..That's awesome! And he doesn't even know what he was doing. Heh...heh..Awesome revenge, chicke.
West24
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
This chapter did not suck! I LOVE this ideal.(I don't think anyone else has thought of this.)(Through Riku sounds like total bastard...)Btw, my parents + sister think I'm even more insate than I was because I kept giggling...(yes, sadly, I'm one of the giggling fangirls...) I try and review each chapter or every other one, maybe. Anyways, bye.
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