 ... 2009-07-29 . chapter 2 STUPID FICS WITH NARUTO AS HOKAGE |
 JoshShadowBoy 2009-07-01 . chapter 7and i though tenten supposed to be with neji since tenten really like neji in the chuni exam thing |
 JoshShadowBoy 2009-07-01 . chapter 6hey if i must say ino and kiba really go together and beside ino dont even have a husband yet and kiba dont even have a wife so they as might go together and uh love the story ^^ |
 10 tailed dragon 2009-05-02 . chapter 12 I like your story and its ver cool just one thing, after this mission here or what ever when the Cunnin exams come around (if you do them) I know of a enemy that would be great and cause some stuff with Naruto What if one of the enemys had the rinnigan and the main body could do paer jutsu that would be cool. also NARUTOS KID NEEDS TO LEARN SOMMONIG KAGE BUSHIN OR SOMETHING LIKE KAGE BUSSIN OTHERWISE HED BE A NEJI KNOK OFF GIVE HIM SOME OF HIS PARENTS JUTSUS TO LEAAR. also Naruto's kid is narutos kid and a certin 9 taild fox is inside naruto... During this misson if TOmmaru or whatever was in a very bad situation it could prove interesting... GOOD JOB! |
 Eve-lyn 2008-06-18 . chapter 12 Finally an update! Took you long enough XD
Too bad that after such a long wait, we still got so little of Teigo, who is by far one of my personal favorites.
On a positive side: the fight in this chapter rocked, I like Yobiko's abilities and cannot wait what will come next. What is Buryaku's plan and will everything turn out okay in the end?
Hope you'll return to updating this piece.
Good work! |
 mlkoolc86 2008-06-13 . chapter 12This is a great chapter and update, if you do plan another chapter look forward to it. |
 Hinata All the Way 2008-06-03 . chapter 12Finally an update! You sure kept us waiting.
But I enjoyed this chapter none the less (only sad that Teigo's part was rather short). I see Yobiko is going to be hard to deal with. I hope Teigo will defeat Hakkotsu in time to help his students. And what is that plan Buryaku thought off?
Can't wait for the next chappie, so update sooner this time! |
 WhiteWolf Kyoko 2008-05-27 . chapter 12Awesome chapter!! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :D |
 neowow 2008-05-25 . chapter 12 upadated after a long time but gr8 chapter.plz do update more regularly |
 Arniecar145 2007-12-25 . chapter 11 Yo keep writing this story
i like it |
 Kai Orihomunon 2007-08-27 . chapter 1Cool start. But what, if you don't mind by me asking, is your translating source? |
 Hinata All the Way 2007-08-01 . chapter 11Okay, now Teigo's officially the most intriguing character in the story. I sure hope you'll reveal more about him later. As for now: update, so that we could see how these fights will go! Great job! |
 Pat 2007-08-01 . chapter 11 Cool... I must say that the inside on Teigo rocked! His story will be interesting to learn, I assume. And a Kimimaro's relative or something? This is getting better and better, so update soon! |
 Nanadaime Hokage 2007-07-31 . chapter 11I'm your 200 reviewer, eh? Cool! That sounds so prestiguos XD
Seriously though this chapter rocked! Loved the way you shown Teigo's past and I hope to learn more of him in the future! Do not hesitate to update, coz this story rocks! |
 Really Annoying One 2007-07-24 . chapter 11The inside on Teigo was nice and now those two, mysterious guys. The first seem to have something to do with Kimimaro and the other... hmm, I wonder what exactly they're after. Update soon! |